Reviews for An extremely weird thirteenth Doctor fic
autumnlover chapter 11 . 10/18/2007
this is just as random as i thought it would be

goodnes,, find a real plotline, because only you can make random c*&p sound this good

xx
autumnlover chapter 7 . 10/18/2007
meggie isn't a bad name

she could be meg for short

but i like twitch

it sounds cooler

x

ps. you've just dissed overone called meggie

oh
autumnlover chapter 6 . 10/18/2007
i don't understad what the hive is

and fly

fly?

are you actuallymad?

wait, i know the answer to that

xx
autumnlover chapter 3 . 10/18/2007
hm... who is susan.

and there are lots of people in thw rold called susan

and i happen to know a ginge dud who is a good friends of yours...

coincidence?

well, i still imagine david tennant but with ginge hair

x
templremus1990 chapter 10 . 4/27/2007
"You did NOT just defy the laws of physics to melt my sandcastle!"

You are too good at this.

And now I wanna go to the beach.
templremus1990 chapter 8 . 4/27/2007
*tries to rid self of Slitheen-playing-table-tennis mental image*

*Fails*
templremus1990 chapter 6 . 4/27/2007
Okay, this chapter settles it. This is going on my favourites. I only wish I could read it all now! Damn English essays...
templremus1990 chapter 5 . 4/27/2007
Penguin? LMAO! That's a fic just begging to be written...
templremus1990 chapter 3 . 4/27/2007
Your chapters are way too short. And I mean that as a compliment, because your writing is such that I just want to keep on reading. Speaking of which, next chapter beckons!
templremus1990 chapter 2 . 4/27/2007
Such simple, eloquent writing, and it manages to be heartbreaking even though we as yet know nothing about Susan. That takes some doing.
templremus1990 chapter 1 . 4/27/2007
No! The Doctor's scarf!

This is really lovely, warm writing; funny, simple and engrossing.
Wariena chapter 11 . 4/6/2007
Finally- An update! Nice work, I'm looking forward to the next installment!
Cute Gallifreyan chapter 11 . 4/4/2007
Hehehe...

The Doctor isn't the Doctor if he doesn't tinker with the TARDIS. He isn't happy if he doesn't have wires and things trailing out of the TARDIS and him working on it.
Wariena chapter 10 . 3/25/2007
I was just thinking- surely it would make more sense to make the first eight chapters a prologue instead of having an infinite number of epilogues? Just a thought.

Anyway, this is good stuff! Keep it up, and don't strain your writing muscles by trying to churn out too many chapters at once, that would be a crime!
Calla Ravenheart chapter 10 . 3/24/2007
GALLIFREY WOULD'VE WON IF YOU DIDN'T STOP PLAYING, YOU COWARDLY COLLYRIAN!

Also:

THE EDEN PROJECT! SATS PAST PAPERS! ARGH! *dies*

*regenerates*

Damn.
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