|Reviews for Recollection|
| Lmb111514 chapter 9 . 5/5/2012
This was absolutely amazing, I loved it.:)
| The defenastrator chapter 1 . 11/6/2009
I like the story but I must point out a fundamental problem with you ending. Rose will live in Hong-Kong (UTC/GMT 8:00) and Jake will live in New york city (UTC/GMT -5:00) giving a time difference of 13 hours. So when Rose would be going to bed at around 9:00 pm in Hong-kong it would be 10:00 am in NYC putting Jake sitting in the middle of class at high school. when Jake gets out of school it would be around 3:00 pm in NYC making it 2:00 am in Hong-kong admittedly laving Rose still asleep but Jake has dragon duties and could not take a nap to contact her. Similarly when Jake goes to sleep at 9:00pm in NYC it would be 10:00 am in hong-kong again putting one sleeping while the others in class. After school Rose would in theory be able to take a nap from around 3:30pm - 7:00pm (considering the time it takes to get home) and catch up with Jake in his dream from 2:30am-6:00am but even assuming the Dream Charms can instantaneously match jake and roses sleep cycles REM sleep (the phase of sleep when dreams occur) only accounts for about 20%-25% of the time spent asleep in adults. although admittedly Jake's and Rose's percentages would be slightly higher because they are not yet adults lets say 35-40% (that's just a guess) you have 3 and half hours per day when its conceivable possible they could be asleep at the same time minus the 90 minutes minimum it would take Rose to get to the first REM sleep phase leaving 2 hours times 40% is 48 minutes of time a day at maxim. but even that would not be maintainable because there is no way that anyone's life could be scheduled around that kind of sleep pattern.
| Claudette14 chapter 9 . 8/21/2009
that was awsome.
| Luiz4200 chapter 9 . 6/4/2008
| Fire The Unicorn chapter 9 . 2/16/2008
I loved it, I'm going to read the sequel now, then the other sequel and then a huntsgirl story. By that time it might be 12 but its worth it cuz uer a great writer
| Fire The Unicorn chapter 8 . 2/16/2008
| Fire The Unicorn chapter 3 . 2/16/2008
I loved it
| Fire The Unicorn chapter 2 . 2/16/2008
I love it so much
| Fire The Unicorn chapter 1 . 2/16/2008
very good but this is how I would of did it:
“There have been witnesses who have spotted the Dark Dragon in Hong Kong. Since we are the only known survivors from encountering him, it’s very important we head over to China now!”
"i'm sorry G my heart stop when you said Hong Kong"
lol any way good first chapter
| Name chapter 6 . 12/5/2007
what's the only thing worse than this fan fic?
The two sequels you cursed us with writing afterward.
as if we hadn't already lost enough brain cells wasting time reading this excuse for a fan fic...
please, for the sake of all things ADJL, never attempt fan fiction again.
a monkey could write a better story than this...
| anon chapter 9 . 4/20/2007
YEAH! Jake and Rose awesome
| SqueakyTheDuck chapter 9 . 3/31/2007
| Moma bear Emma Swan chapter 9 . 3/31/2007
Sweet Ending! better get thene back on the same CONdiebt Thoyght!
| Moma bear Emma Swan chapter 8 . 3/31/2007
Hows She going to React? GREAT JOB!
| Moma bear Emma Swan chapter 6 . 3/31/2007
evil CLIFT HANGER!