Reviews for One Night at the Beach
rat-de-bibliotheque chapter 3 . 4/4/2008
Wow!
DontCopyMe chapter 3 . 3/12/2008
Awesome! And sweet. Will there be more or is that the end?
DontCopyMe chapter 1 . 3/12/2008
SO HOTT!
barbiedoll123 chapter 2 . 3/10/2008
really good
sockyferret chapter 3 . 2/6/2008
This is so different from all the other really sexual stories on this site. Though this was extremely detailed and lemony, I could feel the true love and care they had for each other throughout the entire thing. I think this was really well written.
Lady-Isowen chapter 3 . 2/1/2008
*fans self wildly* Wow...that was one hot story! I sincerely hope that you are planning to update this! :D
barbiedoll123 chapter 1 . 1/24/2008
sounds really good
Full of Ennui chapter 3 . 12/31/2007
Well..it was very...descriptive...and...interesting...
vampiregrrrl110 chapter 3 . 12/31/2007
DAMN! that was HOTT! Another innocent successfully corrupted. Not that I was all that innocent to begin with.

YOu know, Jacob's really. . .um, big. I'm more of a cookie person myself, but i'll trade those in today for a heaping plate of hot, fresh out of the oven MUFFINS!

GREAT story!
monique89 chapter 3 . 12/19/2007
Best Jacob smut i've ever read!

So, so good. There is definately not enough jacob love out there but this is awesome...

Jake So damn hot...
Xo.Simply.Jasmine.oX chapter 1 . 12/15/2007
omg! This was...AMAZING :] u write GREAT lemons! You should write a series of oneshots foe everyone. It wouldn't b copying cuz a lot people do it. I think yu would do it the best!
DantesDarkAngel chapter 3 . 11/23/2007
all that poor food...lol. perfect story and wicked lemons. i can't wait for more...
sanaazzy chapter 3 . 10/24/2007
Oh wow thats so hot!
Captured.By.Insanity chapter 3 . 10/21/2007
really good storie, update soon
very bored girl chapter 3 . 8/31/2007
AWE! IT'S AWESOME!
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