|Reviews for One Night at the Beach|
| s'blue chapter 3 . 8/26/2007
What a fabulous and intense story you have told! I think you handled their intimacy beautifully and I can completely feel happy with the outcome (no pun intended!) of their story together had Edward not returned. Jacob is just so warm...and muscular! Yum! Very descriptive and well written. I believe I was holding my breath most of the time. Thank you for writing this.
Somethingblue from the lex
| Free Fallin Cutie680 chapter 3 . 8/22/2007
finally! ahahha how ironic. i love bella jacob stuff
| Blacktangledheart92 chapter 1 . 8/21/2007
WOW I loved the detail. Hope you will update with more.
| Cayers17 chapter 2 . 8/9/2007
woah! Very Very desciptive! I like it... I hope you didnt already complete this... Update! :]
| SkyCullen chapter 3 . 8/7/2007
great story...nice desire and tense between bella and jacob...update very soon and keeo writing
| Edward-Twilighted chapter 3 . 7/16/2007
That was AWESOME! And so cute! Great work!
| kenziekins418 chapter 3 . 6/29/2007
I love it. Awesome...Is it finished? Hope not! lol
| inlovewithCARLISLE chapter 3 . 6/19/2007
soory its me again...i checked again if i cud review nd i cud! yay! well here it is: wow! i LOVED the last line! tht was a AWESOME story! is there gonna be more?
| edwardcullenlover107 chapter 1 . 6/17/2007
omg is there going to be more?
| XxRosalinexX chapter 3 . 6/13/2007
| RedheadObsession chapter 3 . 6/3/2007
I really like this story can't wait for the next chapter!
| sillybella chapter 3 . 6/2/2007
And Bella is ready to roll... well, she is older than Jake. Who wouldn't want to lead him down the primrose path? Ah, Jake...
| sillybella chapter 2 . 6/2/2007
I really like the banter between Bella and Jacob in this part - playful, sexy, but still innocent enough for the characters we know.
| CinJudes chapter 1 . 6/1/2007
Probably one of the best adult/smutty fics I have read in the fandom. And I'm not even a Jacob/Bella shipper. But you made me have second thoughts about my feelings. Great job.
| jasperhale's girl forever chapter 1 . 5/29/2007
so cute...i love jacob...