Reviews for One Night at the Beach
bookworm070190 chapter 1 . 5/26/2007
WOW, that was extremly passionate. you convey feeling well through your writing
tekhne chapter 3 . 5/25/2007
Jacob is so HAWT.
tekhne chapter 2 . 5/25/2007
I really like how you are so descriptive.
tekhne chapter 1 . 5/25/2007
I love Jacob and Bella!
writing bird chapter 3 . 5/24/2007
Finally they got to the real thing! LOL! I loved this chapter... especially the last sentence! It's so sweet. Update soon!
aka-amor chapter 1 . 5/23/2007
Who needs Edward when you can have all this Jacob goodness? Lots, and lots of wet, drippy Jacob goodness!
unicorn1293 chapter 3 . 5/23/2007
so sexxi
xCuriousx chapter 3 . 5/23/2007
how cute :)

well, finally they got what they want...do we get another chapter? *lol*

never mind this update after this time..though it seemed to last ages for me...months...no problem at all :)
dark fairy79 chapter 3 . 5/23/2007
wow,very realist
epona04 chapter 2 . 5/21/2007
absol brillaint, i may need a shower lol! great stuff
not done baking chapter 2 . 5/1/2007
Both chapters were good, I thought that chapter two was just a little better since there was some emotional plot at the beginning. Don't get me wrong, lemon is nice, but plot and lemon are even better.
a.fall.from.grace chapter 2 . 4/7/2007
wow
Sweetly Sarcastic chapter 1 . 4/1/2007
so much for edward, the jerk i pretty much hated anyway. i like your version of how things should have gone down much better
unicorn1293 chapter 2 . 4/1/2007
love love it
C.ompassionate Revol.utions chapter 2 . 3/31/2007
Fantastic description. Loved it.
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