Reviews for One Night at the Beach
Chrissienuil chapter 1 . 3/19/2007
wow bella is dearing..nice
writing bird chapter 1 . 3/18/2007
It's a very, very good story... and a Jake/Bella, too! Are you going to write more? The last sentence tells me that this story isn't complete yet...
4ever1 chapter 1 . 3/18/2007
this is really good (and I am not normally a fan of Jacob and Bella) - please write more!
xCuriousx chapter 1 . 3/18/2007
well...i don't know why but at the half of the story i had to laugh lol

sure, it wasn't supposed to be funny xD

but the story is really top! hope you give us more xD
In Love With Forever chapter 1 . 3/17/2007
I'm not normally a fan of the Bella/Jacob pairing, but this was really well written and tasteful. Keep up the amazing work!
IHeartTwilightLemons chapter 1 . 3/17/2007
This was very good, you are very descriptive. And I thought it was really funny that they dry humped lmao(sorry I know you probably didn't mean it to be funny)and I hope they didn't get sand anywhere...anyways I really liked it and I can't wait for the next chap!
astarael013 chapter 1 . 3/17/2007
That was really good. Give us more!
Eulalie chapter 1 . 3/17/2007
more more more! we peeps are pevs who need bella/jacob smut done rite. lol. MORE MORE MORE!


sillybella chapter 1 . 3/17/2007
Damn. You know I have a soft spot for Jacob, don't you? Even if I didn't smut him with Bella, I'd like to. But you beat me to it! Best JacobxBella smut I've read.
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