|Reviews for Surprise Homecoming|
| ILOVEMARKAXEL chapter 1 . 2/27/2014
i love that so cute
| Strangerteehee chapter 1 . 10/26/2012
You should do a shower seen next for them. That would be sexy.
| reeby10 chapter 1 . 4/5/2009
hehe very cute! .
| KatSin chapter 1 . 12/10/2008
aww... such a sweet couple!
| Fallenangelkokoro chapter 1 . 7/19/2008
aw how romanticly detailed X3 excellent job :3
| Ishamaru Butterfly chapter 1 . 6/3/2008
OMG i loved this it was really good i think i have to go write a choji shika now cuz there really isnt enough out there...yep ok i g2g write now lol but very good both a good read and a insperation
| Missy chapter 1 . 4/30/2008
| GothicYaoiSpook chapter 1 . 2/9/2008
omy goodness i love this couple it is my faverite we should collaberate sometimes arrigato
| iwuvwonwon chapter 1 . 2/2/2008
OMG I Love this story!
ShikaChou is my favorite pairing! and its so hard to fing GOOD fics about them. this is a definate fave. its so beautiful T_T
-passes out from massive blood loss-
| Val Skia chapter 1 . 11/19/2007
He had always been called lazy or smart but no one had ever called him beautiful, and no one ever said anything like that so seriously.- Thank acually worked. It didn't sound too mushy or untrue, infact it's probably true. Good for you for not being really crappy mushy lovey dovely kiss-kiss and slaughtering their chara's.(Is not being sarastic, I really mean it)
Well, Shika is way too lazy to be a seme, but I can't image Chouji really confessing...hm. Meh. Well someone has to do something.
Smex! YeY for smex.
Your back can’t feel to good at that angle.” -You mean too, not to.
his legs wrapped around the bigger mans waist.-Mans! Who are this men? Mans is a plural, incorrect one at that if I may add. I'm sure you mean man's. As in possesion.
Lol. Poor Chouji. That bed is in a hard to reach space,ne?
Chouji knew he couldn’t keep the Nara waiting, not with a look like that.-Damn. Don't keep him or me waiting. Hamburger.(From a comedian, it's on youtube. Not crazy)
Chouji felt his own cock throb and realized his boxers were way to tight.- Mhm. I bet they are. Take 'em off.
“Please Shikamaru let me make love to you, I can’t stand this anymore!”Oh god Chouji hurry up, I need that in me now.”-Kinda sounds like a porno. But meh. If ya want it ya want it. A bit ooc, but hey who isn't out of it when smexing?
Chouji watched as the different emotions played upon his lovers face-Who joined in on the fun? Lovers is a plural. Lover's is posessive. That's the one ya meant.
other mans hips and thrust his hips harder.-Are you against people being possessive? man's (it's suppose to be).
Chouji was in no state of mind to argu-I would like to argue that you must have been a little distracted while writing this. Where you perhaps envision this out? Argue it is spelt.
That was *applaud* great! 9.5/10. Good job! I bet Chouji and Shika would like to thank you too. I hope you wrote some more on this pairing 'cause I'm gonna check. Or anymore fictions for that matter. As long as it's not het, I don't care enough about het to bother reading those fics.
-glomps- *adds the story to favs* Ya know, we should be able to sort our favs...
Really enjoyed the story!
| negative40G pwns chapter 1 . 8/6/2007
This was an amazing story, out of a scale of 10(with 10 as the best), it was 10/10.
| WincestSounds chapter 1 . 7/10/2007
E, now I'm really excited. T_T That was just awesome, thank you. _
| FireFly92 chapter 1 . 7/9/2007
Yes, I LOVE IT!
So damned HAWT!
And Sexy, but thats my opinion. xD
| angelcurse0538 chapter 1 . 7/1/2007
*has a massive nosebleed* i love it!
| i-love-naruto-yaoi chapter 1 . 6/20/2007
how old are shika and chouji?