Reviews for A Life for a Life
brutusjr chapter 52 . 12/23/2014
Great story, but you are starting to get too far out in left field... Please bring the story back to earth soon, before it spoils.
marquis.shax chapter 21 . 11/15/2014
ok you severely screwed up your story as the Shadow Clone memory transfer was explained BEFORE he left with Jiraiya as he used clones extensively to help him with the Rasengan when searching for Tsunade. If he didn't have the clone memory explained to him he'd have never gotten the rasengan
marquis.shax chapter 19 . 11/15/2014
I really don't understand why Kishi made it a huge point to compare the development of the Rasengan between Naruto and Minato (or even Naruto and Jiraiya). In the case of Minato it took him 3 years because he was creating it it's not like he already knew the steps to take to perfect it and in the case of Jiraiya he didn't have the ability to use tons of clones to help with each step
marquis.shax chapter 7 . 11/15/2014
why did you suddenly switch the name from minato to arashi that makes no sense
marquis.shax chapter 6 . 11/15/2014
lmao uhm you made one mistake by saying that even Tsunade isn't above the law. With Saratobi being dead and her being Hokage that means Tsunade IS the law and can say or do what she wants lol
Winged-Ashes chapter 88 . 9/29/2014
This is good I like it plz update soon
xxdarkxxalicexx chapter 3 . 8/12/2014
Why didn't Sakura or Ino know who Minato was? I'm pretty sure Minato was only Hokage for a short amount of time, but wouldn't his name pop up in history class? After all, he did "defeat" Kyuubi. What injury would last so long that he had to keep bandages over his entire face for three whole years? Surely it would've healed by then.
Rangerfan58 chapter 88 . 1/21/2014
hey this is a good story and deserves to be continued
KnighteWolfe chapter 7 . 12/3/2013
Okay, quick question: why did you slip the name 'Arashi' into the last few sentences? I'm curious.

sparrowhawk13 chapter 27 . 9/29/2013
gotta love Naruto heart!
sparrowhawk13 chapter 26 . 9/29/2013
But the truth of the matter is that Minato did betray him. What is to say he will not betrayed him for Konoha again. One to have to prove himself if Minato.
SkySkittles20 chapter 88 . 7/3/2013
Overall, the story is quite good. Hope you would update soon!
Blizard Engetsu chapter 88 . 4/20/2013
More. Plz this story is amazing
Aladdinina Magi chapter 68 . 11/1/2012
Awwwww raikage
Aladdinina Magi chapter 66 . 11/1/2012
Waaaah! This made me cry.
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