Reviews for Portraits
September's Nobara chapter 1 . 11/22/2008
I found this chapter quite interesting. One neat aspect would be the fact that the readers aren't subjected to endless descriptions of the main character's appearance. However, the random misspellings were a bit distracting, as well as the semicolon usage that seemed a little unnecessary. Also, I would have liked to hear a little bit more about her traveling to Maine. The foreshadowing with the dialogue at the end was great, and all in all, nice work!

Take care,

~September's Nobara.
Iksuik chapter 3 . 2/21/2008
great sroty plz update
TheAngryPrincess13 chapter 3 . 10/29/2007
Wolfenangel chapter 3 . 10/8/2007
I like this story so far, very interesting

Keep it up :)
OceanSyren chapter 2 . 7/26/2007
very nicce! A little shorter than before but it was awesome. Update soon!
OceanSyren chapter 1 . 6/9/2007
Very nice. Update soon!
xMetallicBooger chapter 1 . 4/20/2007
This is an awesome story. I can't wait for more.