|Reviews for A choice is not hard|
| tatiana chapter 4 . 8/17/2006
This story was one of the best i have ever read! I wish there was more though, but as always a good thing never lasts too long, oh well. Wonderful story anyways!
| Dream-Ryoko chapter 1 . 5/5/2006
WOW GREAT i love this story *adds to favourites* its full of good emotion, and its about ryoko and tenchi which i love!
*begins reading next chapter*
| Jagice200 chapter 4 . 3/1/2006
Nice story, I didn't reply to each chpater seeing as though I read this story away from the computer. A side of ryoko you don't see everyday though she seemed a little to passive from her usual side, even with the other half of her inside. Expression of emotion was nicely portrayed through each chapter in good detail. The ending had a real good touch, him seeing the past events of her life adds to the tempo of the story. So far in the pairing of tench/ryoko everyone seems to make ayeka a real dominating beast til the end haha. Good work!
| Turel chapter 4 . 1/23/2006
So here is another one, who wants to see continued this story, you could say I'm something like your fan I really like your fics, so I'm hopping for a continutation
| Ryoko-SP chapter 4 . 1/7/2006
hoh it is a very sweet history and stirring, you accustom was a little excessive but I like much it, hope you continue writing history so beautiful.
good luck and follows like that!
| Goku chapter 4 . 8/15/2005
tenchi's dad was weird at the end but the rest was not bad and im suprised that ryoko does not offer to share tenchi with ayaka with all that she has been through she has to know ayaka has her own share of pain and now that ryoko has secured tenchi for herself she can afford to be genorus
| Priest chapter 4 . 8/29/2001
Oh please do continue the story please _
| Princess Ona chapter 4 . 7/22/2001
love it love it love it
| UnholyDragoon chapter 4 . 7/17/2001
This is a good story arc (ie, plot), but the folow through was less than exemplary. Major problems: 1.) woodeness in dialaogue. While it may be grammatically correct, nobody speaks with that sort of formality continuosly. Watch the series in subtitles to get a bearing for each persons form of slang, then adjust yer writing to compensate. 2.) lack of details. This is the part that I could rant on all day. yes, there were details...all the major plot based ones anyway. But what about the setting? What about how the characters looked and/or felt while they were acting/speaking, etc.? This is where your story falls very, very short. If I had NEVER seen the Tenchi series, then all I would be able to picture is a featureless cast. I also would have no true grasp of how the settings and scenes interacted with each other: In effect, I can't really suspend my disbelief (Technical term for "useing your imagination" in reference to writing/storytelling) far enought to actually "see" what is happening. As a reader, I do not have your perfect vision of what is happeneing; I only see what ye describe to me. Keep that in mind when ye continue to write. 3.) OOCness (Out of Character) While not too OOC with Tenchi, Washu, Katsuhito, or Sasami, Everyone else is exceedingly out of (or not developed enough to be either "in" or "out" of character)Character. Aeka and Ryoko in particular (Where is Aeka's sense of morals [very important in this series, as it is one of the main differences between Aeka and Ryoko]? Where is Ryoko's brash, devil-may-care attitude?) 4.) grammar and spelling. Biggest problem? "Coarse"(rough and uncomfortable)...the word ye want is "course" (a path or a way of doing things). There are others but I'll shut up now. Overall a good plot but it lost something in the translation from author to reader. ****This is not a flame, merely a critique**** 4.8/10
| Rachel2 chapter 4 . 7/10/2001
OMG! That was soooooooooooooo good, please write more PLEASE!
| Ryoko1 chapter 2 . 7/9/2001
Ok Ryoko and Ayeka was in a Fight Ayrka kicked the crap out of Ryoko... and Ryokos going to get Tenchi .
| RIOKO777 chapter 4 . 7/8/2001
I LOVE IT BUTT YOU SHOULD DO A LEMON ! AMD YOU ARE A GREAT WRITTER AND I LOVE THAT COUPLE! P.S. ARE YOU SURE YOU DONT WORK FOR PIONEER?
| Mellie chapter 4 . 7/7/2001
wow... i loved it! Ryoko and Tenchi have always been my favorite couple in the Tenchi series! well, i congratulate you on your work, and if i could give out nobel prizes, i assure you that you would get on! lol, well, keep up the good work, and i hope you write more! also, who is the mother of Tenchi's daughter, Mayuka?
| immagina chapter 4 . 7/7/2001
sugoi! whew...what can i say...way way too good! i loved it! very different from the other tenchi muyo fcis ive read...the only comment i can give is that, you've got some wrong spellings in there...such as coarse...which is supposed to be course...coz the 2 words differ in meaning...and...hmmm...seamed must also be spelled seemed...but rather than that...it was soooo good! keep on writing! ja! x
| DaGoku64002K1 chapter 4 . 7/7/2001
I love this story.