Reviews for Magical Relations
kirstiehamel chapter 71 . 1/14
I have to tell you I am absolutely obsessed with this story. I have read the entire thing at least 5 times during the last year, and every time I am reminded how much I admire your talent for character development and storytelling. I check this story at least 3-4x monthly just to make sure I haven't missed an update. I appreciate your dedication to this fic so much and I hope that you continue!
ashuraou chapter 71 . 1/13
I miss Anthony.
ashuraou chapter 69 . 1/13
Anthony. I really like him. Don't make love someone just to kill him later, please. I can't take it.
ashuraou chapter 14 . 1/11
Vernon is such a nice guy here. A man just love his wife and son. What's wrong with that? Petunia is sick, I guess.
ashuraou chapter 5 . 1/11
Pansy the fangirl in the making!
Guest chapter 6 . 1/5
I just thought of something: 3 galleons an hour is like roughly in USD 30 dollars an hour. Makes sense, since a wand is 7galleons. But since Harry isn't working full time, he wouldn't be making that much money. I think a more reasonable price would be something like 3 sickles an hour.
november123 chapter 71 . 1/3
I love this. The way you've changed the course of their adventures is so creative, but all makes perfect sense. The scene with Anthony was so sad, but I also can't wait to see where the plot goes- two Voldemorts!
I love how you write Pansy and Blaise- they're funny, charming, vindictive, but overall good. I also really like how you have had the Slytherins confront and reject the prejudices they have been raised with- you managed to keep Draco completely in character, yet have him go through entirely different character development than in the books.
Anyways, just to repeat, I love this!
Guest chapter 59 . 1/2
London Knight .
A high impact & extremely well written Chapter . Petunia's issues are overwhelming & were ruining the domestic situation - she HAD to go . Even for the sake of her own sanity ...
Slytherin!Harry is also Intelligent!Harry & Don'tBloodyOvereact!Harry to ! Lol
The family dynamic is much better thought out & believable than Canon .
Please keep updating ...
LK out .
Guest chapter 71 . 12/30/2016
hooked on this story!
Guest chapter 71 . 12/30/2016
Please write more! I've binge read this in 2 days and now I don't know what to do with myself haha seriously good piece of writing, reads like a professional author, hell its better than a what a lot of professional authors produce.
Guest chapter 46 . 12/29/2016
London Knight .
Whoa ! An EXTREMELY Original take on the Graveyard Scene AND an ingenious escape too ! Never thought of using the Knight Bus for a quick getaway ! Massive Kudos to you :-D
Slytherin!Harry doesn't dive in with stupid bravery like Canon Harry & has to rely on his brain, rather than luck, to escape Mouldypants .
As I said brilliantly done .
Keep it up . LK out ...
Guest chapter 45 . 12/29/2016
LK again .
A massive "Oh Shit!" Moment there ! Not a Champion & still he get's kidnapped !
Well at least Cedric will survive now ( unless the Maze kills him ... ) & he could help Harry out as Head Boy next School Year ? Could really see him leading a load of Hufflepuffs into the DA against Umbridge too ... :-)
LK out ...
Guest chapter 44 . 12/28/2016
London Knight .
I'm really not one for shipping , but have an idea that Padme may well be this Harry's Cho Chang ... with all the Titanic-Iceburg connotations ...
Actually had to look up OTP as I've not really heard it before : no I just don't think they'd work our to be honest .
This Fic is getting really good & hope it continues to be updated when I reach current final posted chapter ?
Anyway , a Happy New Year to you all ! :-D LK out ...
Col chapter 55 . 12/28/2016
I've really loved your story so far, but the way Harry is acting now is everything I I hated about him in the fifth book, ugh. I mean, I guess it's understandable, and it's great that he's on good terms with Snape (one less thing for him to snap about), but still. Bleh. Sorry, I'm whinging. I really love your writing, I really do! But gosh, Harry is not particularly lovable right now.
Guest chapter 34 . 12/27/2016
London Knight .
Hermione is even bossier than in Canon but that's not necessarily a bad thing ... She REALLY keeps the guys in line ...
I can see she her as a future Dominatrix ... 8-o ( Bad LK , Bad LK ... )

Pansy being overprotective & then threatening to castrate Harry is hilarious ... any upcoming relationship with them will be ... interesting ... to say the least ... Lol

July 2001 : Harry & Pansy's wedding reception was amazing . As they arrived at the Bridal Room and started stripping off , Pansy unwrapped her main present : An 11 inch , self lubricanting magical strapon dildo ... Harry would be losing his virginity 'The Hard Way' ...

I am such a bad man ... ;-)

Happy New Year All ! LK out ...
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