|Reviews for Black Rose|
| Guest chapter 29 . 5/21/2017
once again, bella gives into edward and forgives him without even a slap to
doesn't matter how sophie charmed him...the fact that she was able to and for him to
not listen to the girls should have sent him to the dog house at least...
instead, she says, it's not your fault?, let's be done with it?
so next time a beautiful vampire comes onto edward, he will understand and just take it?
instead of trying to push her away and put her in her place, he will...what? allow her to get
close? just rather silly it you ask me...
| Guest chapter 22 . 5/21/2017
this story is quite annoying.
why the hell is edward paying so much attn to sophie? he would NOT talk about any trouble with bella with another, nor would he disparage against his loving sister, alice to another as well, esp a woman...not saying he cant be OC but just dont think he would having been raised in early 1900's.
why the hell is bella paying so much attn to jake and NOT edward? she worries and is mad about sophie, yet doing absolutely NOTHING about it! WTH is that about?
edward would NOT be so physical with another woman ie hugging her so much...esp with his old fashion upbringing and values...
bella, whether human or vampire is still in need of a back bone...she is the most annoying
this story could have been good...the premise is good but the execution...could have been better...
not trying to be offensive..all writers/readers have difference of opinion and just stating mine.
| Motherof8 chapter 4 . 9/22/2014
Come on, you couldn't blame bella for thinking what she did. Great proposal.
| Motherof8 chapter 30 . 11/8/2013
Really enjoyed your story. Thanks
| AnUnluckyCharm chapter 30 . 4/17/2011
OMG OMG OMG!11111 I cant believe it's over ! I loooooooooooooooooooooooved it 3 I loved how you made Edward kind of a dickead (becasu of Sophie_ however I gotta say; looove he name Sophie, whydid yo have to usethe name on coplete and total phycotic bitch? Anywa, loved loved loved LOVED the story 3 GREAT job ;)
| mysterious stranger chapter 31 . 12/7/2008
| mysterious stranger chapter 29 . 12/7/2008
Gosh, if i didn't know, i would've thought that was like, actually real. W-O-W i've been reading for like the whole day just trying to get this finished. PLEEZ KEEP WRITING.
| mysterious stranger chapter 28 . 12/7/2008
*YAY* go werewolves! (never saw that one coming)
| mysterios stranger chapter 25 . 12/7/2008
| mysterious stranger chapter 24 . 12/7/2008
alice, strangle him
| mysterious stranger chapter 23 . 12/7/2008
O, my god
| mysterious stranger chapter 20 . 12/7/2008
God, i want to strangle Sophie
I am sobbing as i write this
| mysterious stranger chapter 16 . 12/7/2008
| mysterious stranger chapter 14 . 12/7/2008
this made me cry
| mysterious stranger chapter 10 . 12/7/2008
O MY GOD
you are incredible
I like cried on that chapter!