Reviews for Everything Works If You Let It
Guest chapter 23 . 1/1
Really good!
Logy81 chapter 23 . 11/18/2018
This is cute. Though it was decade ago. Still like it lot!
pixiegust chapter 1 . 2/16/2018
this is so cute! I absolutely love it. I could hear each character in their own voice and could picture maybe two chapters to make an episode! (leaving room for a b story of course). enjoyed this so much. thank you for an amazing story!
gotye chapter 23 . 12/26/2017
Wow, coming across this so many years late but, this is dead on. You could have written for the show. Mannerisms and manner of speaking were perfect. Great story
Goldenbassets chapter 23 . 11/24/2017
What a freaking adorable story! I loved this so much!
DonnaDarko chapter 11 . 6/8/2017
I know this is a JH fix, but Kelso stealing that nail polish is pretty romantic. I like how you're not vilifying everything Kelso ever did.
Girken chapter 23 . 4/2/2015
Great story
Secrets4theunderground chapter 23 . 3/22/2015
Great story, I loved it.
Guest chapter 23 . 2/8/2015
Aldrean Treu Peri chapter 19 . 11/11/2014
I love Kelso's random moments of insight and intelligence.
appalove chapter 22 . 10/25/2014
On second read, I still think this is an adorable story! It's great how you kept most of the events the same but just changed the results to fit their new relationship. Jackie with Kelso is a much more pleasant person and I think Hyde could definitely have been convinced to date her earlier in the show if she had shown the backbone she has here. I think you captured well Jackie and Donna's relationship too - how they weren't close yet but Donna's zealous feminist anger helped compensate for that and still made her pretty angry at Hyde, lol.
KraZiiePyrozHavemoreFun chapter 23 . 5/2/2014
appalove chapter 23 . 1/4/2014
Absolutely adorable story. I love these well done "what ifs" that change one thing in the show and run with it. I think the point in the timeline you chose, at the first season prom, was perfect, because back then Hyde was noticeably more open to feelings, even if he denied it. At that point in the timeline Jackie was also much less desperate or burned by her relationship with Kelso (after only their first break up) so it makes sense that she'd catch on quickly about playing it cool with Hyde instead of needily stalking him like she did in seasons 2 and 3. I liked how you wove in the events of the first season with the new Jackie/Hyde relationship, and their brief break up totally made sense for the characters. Well done! :)
sfbxfcb chapter 23 . 1/14/2012
accioLorna chapter 23 . 7/3/2009
Dude that was seriously awesome :)
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