|Reviews for Everything Works If You Let It|
| huangjj chapter 23 . 1/4
Absolutely adorable story. I love these well done "what ifs" that change one thing in the show and run with it. I think the point in the timeline you chose, at the first season prom, was perfect, because back then Hyde was noticeably more open to feelings, even if he denied it. At that point in the timeline Jackie was also much less desperate or burned by her relationship with Kelso (after only their first break up) so it makes sense that she'd catch on quickly about playing it cool with Hyde instead of needily stalking him like she did in seasons 2 and 3. I liked how you wove in the events of the first season with the new Jackie/Hyde relationship, and their brief break up totally made sense for the characters. Well done! :)
| sfbxfcb chapter 23 . 1/14/2012
| MadBoxOfTurtles chapter 23 . 7/3/2009
Dude that was seriously awesome :)
| Hyde's Bride chapter 23 . 10/17/2008
Aww this was too cute! I loved it! It's always great to see them get together earlier because they are so menat to be! You did a great job on this! :)
| LadyShard chapter 23 . 7/25/2008
This story was just over all yum. The sick scene really just pulled at my heart strings and me right into the story. Ever think of doing a squeal?
| Guest chapter 1 . 1/12/2008
why don't you use periods? it's very annoying...
| XXspuffster101XX chapter 23 . 9/12/2007
aww...yay...there should be a song...heh...happy endings are always nice...good thing Hyde's old home was so decrepid that it wasn't hard to keep Jackie a secret...anyway...this was a great story
| RegardstoBroadway chapter 23 . 9/11/2007
Hooray! Everything is as it should be!
You did a great job on this story: you stayed in character, kept people interested, and peppered little things in that we all identify as part of our show. This story was great and it's going in my favorites!
| joeypotter85 chapter 23 . 9/3/2007
i loved every single chapter of this story! it was awesome and you rock! make another story and soon so i can review it and i mean now lady! )
| allienicole16 chapter 23 . 9/3/2007
awe great job. Loved this story. That was just the cutest way to end it. Loved it.
| Zenkindoflove chapter 23 . 9/2/2007
Aw, what a wonderful ending Ultra! I absolutely loved the whole thing. From Red slipping and admitting that he cared about Hyde's living situation all the way to Hyde whisking Jackie away from his house and in his own way saying that he loved her back! *jumps with excitement* Squee! It was just so cute!
I loved that Red quickly caught on that Hyde was up to something before he and Kitty showed up. Typical Red though to assume it had to deal with drugs. Lol, fortunately for Hyde instead of frying his brain with alternate consciousness drugs, he was getting high off some Jackie lovin'. Once again, I liked how you used some lines from the episode but you really made the scene original on your own. Hyde's rat infestation story cracked me up, especially because Jackie kept asking him if he was really lying or not.
I really love how you not only ended this story on a happy note for Jackie and Hyde but also at a place where obvious progress is still in their future. They just jumped over a pretty big hurdle that was a huge thorn in their spines from the show, but at such an early point in their lives. In my mind, they just lived happily ever after in EWIYLT world. I really loved the end paragraph of this story. It was so Hyde, especially the whatever. You really managed to take his character to new heights in this story, along with Jackie's, and I think that was the best part about this.
Bravo! I can't wait for inspiration to strike you again for this fandom. :)
| Loudmouse chapter 23 . 9/2/2007
that was so cute especially the part of Jackie with the bat
| XXspuffster101XX chapter 22 . 8/30/2007
and there was much rejoicing...yay...heh...I am much with the pleased how this chapter ended...'bout bloody time...heh...looking forward to the next update and if the Forman's find Jackie and such...heh...update soon please
| joeypotter85 chapter 22 . 8/26/2007
alright! the whole gang is back together again yeah! lol i'm glad to see hyde finally open up a little. it was a real rarity for him to do so on the show. its kind of sucky that hyde's mom left him in this story, but if you think about it, its kind of necessary. i think it was in that point of the show that hyde's character kinda became bitter and resentful, at least until him and jackie got together. can't wait for that last chapter. really looking forward to it. i've loved every single chapter of this story and hope you will write another one as great as this one soon.
| Zenkindoflove chapter 22 . 8/26/2007
I really liked the Red/Kitty scene at the beginning of this. If I can remember correctly, their conversation about Hyde's fate at the end of S1 went a lot like this, but obviously not word for word. That's what's so awesome about it I think.
I really loved JH's conversation. It was exactly how I imagined it and it was more than satisfying! Jackie starting off as the open and honest one was just too perfect. That's how she is. She pours Hyde her heart in hopes that he'll give her his in return. I thought you handled his response perfectly. I loved that Jackie suggested that they should do some stuff because she felt better. Hehe... who knows where it might have lead if the Forman's didn't show up!
Speaking of that... oh man! I wonder what's going to happen. Are they going to find her? Lol... I'm really curious now.
I'm sad that this story is ending but you have written such a great fic. All great fics have to end sometime, right? I really can't wait to see what kind of ending you have in store for us. :)