|Reviews for Mor & SG1|
| Jen chapter 1 . 11/26/2008
"Behind them stood a young teenage girl, shimmering long dark brown hair hanging to her waist, dark blue jeans and long sleeved black shirt clinging to her slim, shapely figure, and face with piercing blue eyes twisted in a purely confused expression.
Daniel, Jack, and Walter found their mouths dropping open before they realized what they were doing and swiftly shut them again."
This is awful, to put it simply. Your character is a Mary-Sue. Someone so perfect, that everyone instantly falls in love with her... It's disgusting and uncreative.
Do yourself a favor. Go read up on Mary-Sues and how to avoid them before trying to write again.
(At least your grammar and spelling was better than some.)
| 1477166 chapter 2 . 2/7/2008
| E. Nagrom chapter 2 . 1/7/2008
aww bet the girls were upset that they lost the second best view of Daniel ;)
Hmm wonder what Morgan will do next in annoying Daniel.
| nemo1986 chapter 1 . 12/31/2007
she's a Mary-Sue.
| Greenleaf7 chapter 1 . 3/21/2007
:D Well, you've definitely catched my interest. It was funny, interesting...and I WANT MORE! :D so update asap...or else. ;)
| devianttart chapter 1 . 3/19/2007
This is just the weirdest thing ever. Good Job!
| E. Nagrom chapter 1 . 3/19/2007
sounds very interesting can't wait for more
| shivy chapter 1 . 3/18/2007
unusual and fast-paced but funny and well written, I'm intrigued please continue :)