Reviews for Justice Men of Avengers
B93B chapter 1 . 10/11/2007
pretty awesome lol
lainshadow chapter 1 . 3/19/2007
I'm not sure if I'll keep reading but I like this chapter.

The story was good but it was a bit...snappy?

Try describing things more. Your surroundings, not clothes.

People don't really need to know that much about clothing (my opinion) but try and include it into the story if you really need to descrbe it. e.g Barry looked down, he was a skeleton in a red suit.

((Time jump))

Noticing for the first time the symbol on his chest.

Just some thoughts.

Keep writing!