Reviews for Aging
me1234567890 chapter 1 . 6/9/2012
The end is soo cute, congratilations, its very good.
Gentle Breezes chapter 1 . 7/25/2011
Oh my gosh, I laughed so HARD while reading this! I could just imagine Shanks in his drunk rambling, with Ben just sitting there calmly like so. Hahahaha! Really awesome piece of writing!
fishnamedjim chapter 1 . 6/24/2011
really well done :) a great new idea
Mort chapter 1 . 2/18/2011
Fan-FUCKING-tabulous!

well written and GENIUS!

Definitely brilliant.

Loved it.

It drew me in... I believed it... I saw it... I even laughed.
Lilith Kisaragi chapter 1 . 7/4/2010
Gotta looove Ben after reading this. And gotta love Shanks. Hell, gotta love anything you write. But I specially gotta remark how good you portrayed Beckam. Really, you make crazy fangirls like me like him. Fantastic, as always
cherrichik chapter 1 . 5/28/2009
ah, that sweet :3 defs a fave!

-cherri
ReadR chapter 1 . 5/11/2009
I like it. They are all IC, and I could imagine Luffy and Zoro gonna be like that in the future
Eternal Dumas chapter 1 . 4/19/2009
Ben and Shanks sound like an older version of Luffy and Zoro talking. xD
Tiahna chapter 1 . 10/18/2008
Daw XD The ending was so cute XD Gotta luv Beckman XD
Dancing Nightmare chapter 1 . 8/22/2008
This was made of awesome xD I can picture it clearly in my head... lol, Shanks is such a moron. His drunk!personality is spot on.

... Now that I think about it, I can so see this with Luffy and Zoro in a couple of years
tortilla lady chapter 1 . 6/23/2008
lol...i kept seeing shanks as jack sparrow & ben as will turner!
Oni Giri Slash chapter 1 . 6/28/2007
Aw, that was so beautiful! I love Shanks and go Ben - even with greying hair!

Brilliant! Keep it up!

Oni Giri Slash
LuffyxRuby chapter 1 . 6/19/2007
LOL that was good
Some Girl101 chapter 1 . 5/28/2007
Hehe, that was cute!

Shanks kinda reminded me of Jack Sparrow from Pirates of the Caribbean. Though that might be just because I was watching the 3rd one earlier today in the movie theater. P
Solo Loco Ellingson-Rose chapter 1 . 5/18/2007
Ahahahaa! That was HILARIOUS! Multiple good points in there too! Keep up the good writing!
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