|Reviews for Legend of Zelda: The Return|
| Faron21 chapter 5 . 10/8
In the other review in which I said I was a Luffy, i did not mean i was literally a duplicate of Luffy. I was just explaining my personality.
| Faron21 chapter 41 . 10/8
I guess Link became a Gerudo King. However, I also guess that Link got to be a winner. Now I should go skim the sequel.
| Faron21 chapter 6 . 10/8
Ganondorf is using astral duplication carelessly. He ended up being able to make duplicates of many people if this was logical. Then he realized that they would end up having short life spans. That means that Ganondorf did not post a plan for that immediately. Maybe you wanna read another fic in which Ganondorf has a plan for just himself to temporarily prosper? However, I get the impression that this is a Minor Heroism Fic in which the power level of the antagonist group is not conmensurate with their control ontologies and the level of teleological strength those ontologies have. You could just say that the Moblins are good enough, but then they would run out of energy after a few months. That means Ganondorf loses. A soul's survival depends on its origin. Those Moblins could not survive except in a Lesser Realm. The same is true of any other monsters that may be present.
| Faron21 chapter 42 . 10/8
Why do you have Link presume Ganondorf is eternal? To Ganondorf, only hatred is eternal now. If he was eternal, his life would be a different life. He sought death to others. Link had first presumed something ambiguous. I have not read the full fic. Do you understand that Links are not eternal until the end? They wait for the real author to tell them what Link's destiny is. Afterwards, they realize that they are just waiting for an outcome. Links are eternal. However, what that means is that eternity is valuable. I will get around to reading this story. I believe it is not appropriate for Link to say this at the end. Link instead needed to learn from the Sacred Realm Sages what it meant to be eternal and overcome worthless people like Ganondorf. Regarding evil as eternal means one doesn't consider that they make it less serious.
Does Link think that souls are also everlasting? If they are, they will eventually learn that evil souls are killed. You do not need to worry about that. You can expect another review.
| Just me chapter 1 . 1/12
I wouldn't apologize about using the psycho word, it fits perfectly with the flow of this story. If people get so bent out of shape over the psycho word in LOZ The Return then I really want to see their reaction to that Sweet but Psycho song.
Your stories are amazing, I would leave them exactly as is
| Taura Callisto chapter 41 . 1/14
I’m just dropping in to re-read one of my all-time favorite fics.
I left my first review of this story waaaay back in March of 2002, and I can honestly say that 20 years later (and man that makes me feel old), that this story still keeps me up reading way past my bedtime, which I think should be a standard for any author. So thank you for my sleepless nights and tired days. It’s been a pleasure reading through this story again and who knows, maybe in another decade I’ll come back and review again :)
| Azrael Dovrahkrin chapter 1 . 1/1
I’ll start off by saying this was one of the first fics I ever read and was probably the one to get me hooked into this crazy site. Back when I first read it I was too nervous to review because I felt like an intruder but I’ll do so now. I really do love how you made the characters feel real and how there were consequences for actions. And while it’s been a few years since I’ve read this I know it has stuck with me for a long time. I actually still recall the entire poem for Dampe from memory cause I really loved it. I was looking at this to consider rereading it, and I only just now looked at the complete date and it kinda sent me into a small crisis because it was the year I was born. I had a whole little thing about old I felt versus how young and small I really am. But it doesn’t change how I feel about the story.
| Axccel chapter 3 . 1/2
Yeah, you're using psycho correctly.
And ironically, this Dark Link didn't need to do anything. The Master Sword is the keystone of the seal. Remove it and the way to the Sacred Realm is wide open. Link already removed it. Great job breaking it, hero.
| Axccel chapter 1 . 1/2
"Ableist language" lol. Here's a tip: pandering to a tiny, violently vocal, spec of a population is pointless. It just makes you look silly and foolish trying to cater to people who throw tantrums over nothing and, as that is their entire self-identity, will NEVER "forgive" someone who doesn't speak and act the way they dictate even once and no matter when it happened.
Also, a psycho is not disabled. It's a mental illness, but does not prevent thing from living normally nor affect it. It doesn't even come with murderous urges, just that they don't see people as people. So, it's not a disability. Basically, those people you're apologizing to are psychos. Or sociopaths?
| Sephenia chapter 42 . 12/6/2022
You're amazing! Your writing is incredible. This is my favourite fanfiction of all time. I love how you've written the characters and your sense of humour. I finished this fanfic twice now, and if Reconciliation has a new update, ill deffs reread it, so the story is fresh in my mind. Amazing!
| shelwyn chapter 41 . 11/4/2021
Wow so much esoteric junk and it's just a sword fight and a shove I to the portal lol
| shelwyn chapter 40 . 11/4/2021
That was some esoteric bullshit lol.
| shelwyn chapter 39 . 11/4/2021
Meh, Link is constantly injured or weak or dragged down its honestly kind of annoying.
| Guest chapter 9 . 5/22/2021
Can I just say that the beginning of this chapter is a masterpiece. I don't think I've ever laughed so hard. I applaud you.
| mikaerusan chapter 1 . 5/14/2021
you corrected this in 2015. how did you manage to keep the misspelling of the very first word of your story, the actual title? "Ledgend"?