Reviews for Legend of Zelda: The Return
Axcel chapter 5 . 5/10
They have yet to restore Link's memories becaaauuse? If they did, he'd know what to do to stop the threat and how to defeat Dark Link (which he'd promptly go do). Not restoring him to full memories and power, items and all (the items are from their temples, after all) is stupid.
Axcel chapter 2 . 5/10
Cutting it a little close, eh "Sheik"? He almost found you out that time.
Axcel chapter 1 . 5/10
I get the feeling Epona kept her memories. You know, if Link lost his nemories, then he couldn't have warned Zelda about Ganondorf. A plot hole in the game, I think, is that I think the sages kept their memories whenever Link traveled to the past during the game, so wouldn't Zelda have kept her memories, too?
a HUGE fangirl chapter 1 . 3/11
Hi I am a HUGE Zelda fan and have read your fanfic about a million times and have loved every part of it every time through and can i just say, Thank you! I am currently unable to express my feelings of your amazing writing and of your overall way to describe (and quite thoughroughly, may I add) Link's characterization in a way so that he fits the description we all know and love, but also fits his part in your story plotline and what he goes through, emotion and feelings, etc. May I ask, did you create this story plotline solely on the game? And if so, HOW? I admire your perspective and opinion on your characterization on Link and every other character from the Zelda series you included in your story and agree with it full heartedly, without the words to describe them as well as you have done so. I just want to say thank you, because even though you may not realize it, your story is just as impactful, if not more than any other well known and loved novel. Trusting my 'heart of hearts' and following my gut is what I took most from your story, and that maybe stubborness isnt all a bad quality to have. I have yet to read the sequel (don't worry, I'm getting to it I promise!) And although I found this fanfic ages after it was published, (which I found this fanfic in 2010, and it was published in 2001) I couldn't be happier that i did find it, and I can certainly say it did change something in me. I will continue to reread your story, and I will never cease to be awestruck by your impactful words, your writing no longer deserving of the simple term 'fanfic.' Story suits your writing much better. Recently, I heard news that netflix will be creating a live action Zelda tv series, needless to say I can't expect anything close to your way of describing Hyrule and its occupants. Im not sure if you're reading this, but if you are, I do hope I got my point across, being that your writing has been inspirational to me, and that if you have any urge to write another fanfic (or even a novel), it being Zelda related or not, don't hesitate! I may be 13 years of age, but being a bookworm and having read multiple pieces of literature, I know Amazing writing when I read it. I'm sorry it took me a while to build up the courage to write a review, but I hope you read this all on all. Question: Do you have a tumblr? I would love to follow you on any social media. I would love it if you replied to me! My email is: and i would love to know if you were planning on writing another Zelda fanfic, based off a different Zelda game.
Anyway, another 'Thank you' feels like the most suitable way to end this.

Sincerely and Genuinely,
A fangirl who goes by the name of Kim, and has the nickname of Kimothy, who would be fangirling like crazy if she were to receive an email from you!
Dragontamer997 chapter 5 . 2/12
I know this story is both old and very much finished...but I just have to point out that the sword is called 'The Master Sword"...not the Master's Sword...its small I know but damn it every time I read that it bugs the ever loving hell out of me. If you dear author are still alive and read this...PLEASE PLEASE go through and edit it...it is just so wrong for someone to get the name of that sword wrong.
Axcel chapter 7 . 1/1
Then, after another time reset, the sages decide to simply restore Link's memory at the start of their new adventure. There was much kicking of ass.
Blazingfyres chapter 41 . 11/8/2014
I DON'T KNOW IF I'VE REVIEWED THIS BEFORE but I'll have you know this is the third time I've read this and I nearly cried again. (Sorry, I had it on caps lock and I didn't feel like retyping.) This is so wonderful I really want to cry.
I wanna read the sequel, so I will.
-Blaze
XanaduHawk chapter 31 . 10/29/2014
Omg, for a moment I seriously thought we had lost Neesha.
XanaduHawk chapter 9 . 10/27/2014
The part were Mido finds out the truth is touching.
kerapal bubbles chapter 42 . 10/9/2014
OMG I FINISHED IT. In one day. Sorta. It was around 3 in the afternoon when I started it, and it's now after 3am, but WHATEVER I FINISHED IT. Stubborn, I know, but I just couldn't stop reading it! Every time I had to stop, I immediately came back here. This entire story just BLEW MY MIND. I could go on and on and on, and I'd really like to say more, but I'm afraid I'll have to send you a personal message later with a more detailed review. It is, like I said, around 3:30am, and I have school in the morning. I look forward to diving into the sequel, and thank you for creating such an invigorating experience. :)
kerapal bubbles chapter 32 . 10/9/2014
As an interesting note, my friend's sister just had a baby boy today, and his name is Brayden. I just thought it was a funny coinky-dink. ;D
kerapal bubbles chapter 29 . 10/9/2014
I'm taking a break from marathoning this to drop a review, and HOLY CRAP. I've been reading this for about the past 5 hours, nonstop, because I just can't stop reading it! There are so many twists and turns and I LOVE Link in this. Hunter, too. I am just blown away; your story-telling is AMAZING. Absolutely amazing. I can't wait to finish it; I mean, homework isn't important anyway, right? I'll leave another, much longer review at the end. I can't wait!
Thorn92 chapter 42 . 9/25/2014
I just want to say I love you, in a totally platonic way. This is my second time reading it...and I can't believe how much I missed the first time. Wow there is so much going on behind the scenes! Keep up the fantastic work :)
bethany.mcneilis chapter 42 . 9/17/2014
WOW! Just...wow! I am 12 years old and I have just read this. I am a huge L-of-Zelda fan and I think this was brilliant. You didn't have to apologize for any of those things, it fits in really well with the other Zelda games. I think this is the best fan-fiction EVER and you should definitely write more. May I send you an idea for another fan-fic? If you don't mind, my e-mail adress is: (All lower case) xxxxx :-)
MoonlightMasquerader chapter 9 . 8/19/2014
This chapter would have to be my favourite so far, purely because of Mido's realisation that Link is Link (something I've always wished was in the game)... well, that and Impa throwing him into a pond. I love how you've written Link's character and I love how you've got Zelda struggling with the whole Sheik thing but not telling Link. To be perfectly honest I just love the whole thing!
I'm going to be reading this every chance I get, so hopefully I'll finish it over the next couple of days
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