|Reviews for Legend of Zelda: The Return|
| Guest chapter 9 . 1/22
Oh my goodness that was the cutest most heart rending chapter I have ever read thank you so much! I love how the two of them are friends now! :D
| XxxAnimeWolfxxX chapter 42 . 1/20
This is the most amazing fanfiction I have ever read, ever.
A lot of the stuff I wanted to comment on I've probably forgotten because I've been reading this story on an app without internet, but holy hell this was a fantastic read. It wasn't predictable or repetitive, the dialogue was great and flowed smoothly between characters and internally, the OCs are some of my favorite characters besides Link, the fights were very well thought out, and your jokes were both hilarious and extremely clever (I wish I remembered a specific example, but just know that I couldn't help but laugh to myself out loud several times while reading this story).
For a character that doesn't speak, you gave Link a lot of personality and I can't help but think that it fits him perfectly. Every internal problem he had was real and I sincerely felt bad for him throughout every one.
The ending was one of my favorite parts. After Link having that dream for so long, to see it finally happen was something else. The situation felt entirely hopeless, especially with the thoughts of all of his friends watching him bleed out on the altar. But, after Ganondorf came back, when everyone turned around at the sound of his laughter I couldn't help but smile like an idiot because the Hero of Time was gonna kick some serious ass and put Ganon back in his place.
I sincerely wish the story was a published book so that I could buy it and read it again because it's honestly way too good not to be. Your writing skills are that of an expert and I never got bored reading.
The only "problem" I might've had with this story was the part with uniting Hyrule through music, but I read your reasons for that and understand it. It just seemed a little weird that it was never mentioned again after that.
I'm sure there were more things I wanted to mention about how great this story was, but I either can't remember them or can't say anything else without being redundant. 10/10, grade A story!
| TaiyaZelasi chapter 42 . 1/20
I loved reading this story, awesome adventure and set of characters! :D
| Rexnos chapter 42 . 1/17
I have mixed feelings about this story on the whole. I liked your characters' personalities and the interesting ideas you used in your plot, but the plot also bothered me at times. More often than not, the progression of the plot moved towards what would be most dramatic throughout the story rather than what really made sense for the good guys or bad guys to do. I think this issue sprung from the fact I could never quite define Link's power level. He got stronger as the story progressed in an interesting and reasonable way, but he seemed to get destroyed more often than he did the destroying, even when battling mooks.
I also think you used a handful too many OCs. To be honest, I actually liked a number of them, particularly Hunter and Neesha. Unfortunately I had a very difficult time keeping everyone straight in the later third of the story, namely the many Sheikah and Gerudo.
All in all though, not half bad. I think I would have liked it more if Link's trials were of a more physical nature rather than social or emotional, but that's more about me as a reader than you as a writer. As a drama-based story, this one stands up quite well.
| Isodrink chapter 42 . 1/17
I hope with the deepest parts of my heart that you read this, even over 10 years after you've finished the story.
It is, because I want to express my gratitude towards you for writing this story. This in my eyes is not just merely a fanfic. It is THE fanfic for OoT. It is THE afterstory after the game has ended. I can't imagine there being a better one out there in the same genre.
You have in here great characters and speeches, even though you seem not confident in most of the time - I saw plenty of " I don't like this chapter. This one doesn't suite my taste either..." parts in the author notes. I wish to encourage you that the chapters themselves are still great. The setting is quite a good one. And you managed to pull of inserting new characters who can be instantly loved, no small feat. Anyway, I bow before your work. Kudoz.
| RandomButLoved chapter 40 . 1/10
I just want to say that this chapter is the best so far. It is beautifully written and especially the ending how no Link leaves the sword, and the part where it showed how all of them met Link T.T
| RandomButLoved chapter 21 . 1/9
I'm just going to say this now. I love Hunter 3
| RandomButLoved chapter 15 . 1/9
So sad, but so cute! I loved the part when Link was telling little Linky about his clothes 3
| RandomButLoved chapter 14 . 1/9
Wow . . . this. Is. Awesome!
| RandomButLoved chapter 13 . 1/9
Awesome! This is getting even better now :3
| RandomButLoved chapter 12 . 1/9
No! Linky shouldn't have to think that he needs to do everything alone! T.T
| RandomButLoved chapter 11 . 1/9
I love Neesha! She's so awesome! And Malon's story . . . it's all so good :3
| RandomButLoved chapter 10 . 1/9
I'm surprised that he didn't get annoyed over the heat :P Hopefully Zellie will be safe.
| RandomButLoved chapter 9 . 1/9
Aw, finally Link made amends with Mido - or the other way around- still, it's cute! :3
| RandomButLoved chapter 8 . 1/9
That ending was so cute! When I heard that you switched to third-person, I thought you were going to do something on Dark Link - but that was WAY better :3