|Reviews for In the shape of a girl|
| ek-sen'trik chapter 1 . 4/6/2007
You described Rue so well.
&& It's like you filled in all the gaps of her true character.
Definitely going to be faved.
| LunaSphere chapter 1 . 3/19/2007
I liked this. I realized it's already short, but I think it would be an even stronger piece after some judicious trimming. If you just tightened all the language, gave 1 example for something rather than 3, it would be more striking. Also, the last line/summary is very powerful-it definitely pulled me into the story and made me want to read it, but it feels overused since it has the memorability of being both the summary as well as the last line [which by the nature of its placement always gets more emphasis]. You might consider changing one or the other.