|Reviews for Life is Beautiful USED to be her stolen voice box|
| Poppy Young chapter 22 . 3/4
ok. I REALLY LOVED THIS FANFIC SOOOOO MUCH! but i'd just really wished u finished it. its such a shame. I started reading this going ahh, this is cool. but your writing skills really shone through. You were to the point but with just enough description. AND THE PERSONALITIES! MY FEELS! SASUKE's personality was like SWEET AND ADORABLE and sakura! omg. most fanfic's sakura is bold and brave but i like the contrast. I was going to comment on every chapter coz i loved it so much but really wished u finished. SUCH a good story line/plot 3 it! AMAZING keep up the amazing writing skills. (Damn, i wanna buy a copy of this [to be VERY honest])
| CosmicSynopsis chapter 2 . 2/20
Did Ami just tell her not to talk to her? She's mute, what's she gunna say? But great story so far.
| A Little Birdie Tells Me chapter 19 . 1/21
this story is too awesome! I just love it!
| Guest chapter 6 . 1/9
I feel like the story is rushed and every little thing is exaggerated. There are also grammatical and spelling errors. A lot.
| dark moon chapter 22 . 1/6
oh my gosh i luuuvv ur story do u know i actually cried reading it. Anyways(-insert-puppy eyes)plz...plz... plz... make a sequel soon
| yoitscho chapter 2 . 1/4
It's a good story. The grammar needs a little work. Other than that, it's fine.
| Guest chapter 3 . 1/3
Too much of a coincidence. I think she would have an aid, who could communicate for her, rather than have four miraculous girls appear who suddenly know how. Bleh.
| Guest chapter 2 . 1/3
Okay story plot, but you seriously need to work on your grammar.
| Sasusaku Uchiha chapter 22 . 12/15/2013
I remember when I first read this story. It was a LONG time ago! It was before I had an account on . When I finally got an account, I tried to find this story, but I couldn't! When I finally found it, I was ecstatic! I reread the entire thing! I am soo happy I found this story again! I absolutely love it!
| sakura.souen chapter 22 . 11/28/2013
this story was beautiful and perfect... but i cant wait for you to remake it or to make the sequel ! i loved this story so much i found it sad how the ending is just stated and not put in chapters... but this story is soooooo good :) one of the best i have yet read! The plot was very good and original ! loved it! i am right now gonna read another one of your story!
| Violentkitsune chapter 1 . 11/19/2013
I gotta say i really like the storyline though and how its going along - having sakura try her best to keep her cancer condition secret from all her friends and eveything. And having ami turn into someone who actually cares now? That was actually a pretty good twist - i got worried that she'd make sakura's life hell forever. I really wish you'd keep going with this story though.
HINT: just work a little bit on the grammar and make sure the character developments are consistent with everything you've stated in each chapter.
Ka kite ano
| rEvengeIsSwEeterThAnlOve chapter 22 . 11/17/2013
I'm kind of dissapointed with the ending (the summary stuff?). I really think that if that were written the normal, it would have been better (the storyline's really cool). Still, thank you for writing this fic :D gives me a whole lot of feeling
| Mina chapter 1 . 10/26/2013
Oh and I forgot about the names. Joe and Marilyn. Seriously? Think about the setting. They just don't do well together.
Research. It's quite very easy to use the internet to help you with names. Even the school's name.
Drop the japanese phrases and stick to English. "Gomen ne" was used a lot. It sticks out. Japanese names are okay, japanese phrases makes your work immature. So avoid them unless necessary.
| Mina chapter 1 . 10/26/2013
I hope you do improve.
This is childish at best. I'm around halfway through it but I'm not sure if I want to finish it.
It has too many cliché elements that just does not mix well. You should have dropped the gang leader background for Sasuke. Mute AND cancer patient is overkill for Sakura.
It was inconsistent. One chapter says Hinata and Neji are cousins and then another one says they're not. One chapter says Sasuke was drunk (so he cheated) and then another one says he has way too great alcohol tolerance. It was inconsistent. You might want to review your written chapters especially if you're writing more than one multichapter fic simultaneously.
Do your research. Sakura has cancer in your story. Try to at least read about cancer. What kind, what are the symptoms, what are the treatments. "Or something" does not cut it. Sakura uses sign language. I have a background on sign language and I know that that's NOT how you communicate through signs. Read and research a little.
Construction. The way you write it is too bland. I'll be honest. I've read stories written by 12-year-olds better than this one. You write like a whiny (and bitchy) girl. Improve on grammar. Try to read good novels. Expand your reading materials.
Proofread your works. Or find a good proof reader.
Read the reviews and learn from them. Don't let them discourage you though. Practice some more. I hope you can write better fics than this one.
Good job on trying though. :)
| Kiko12350 chapter 13 . 10/22/2013
Omg is ot possible?