|Reviews for Mana|
| FutureEater chapter 17 . 2/8
I hope Allen calls Smith a bastard :3
| Jinkies chapter 43 . 1/19
Are you a genius? This story was really amazing.. ;-;
| Jinkies chapter 13 . 1/19
Ah! I love you so much! This story is changing my view entirely on -Man itself! You are amazing! ;D
| BluezebraAFHS chapter 43 . 1/5
I know you posted this story a long time ago, but I just have to say it was probably one of the best -Man stories I've ever read. It's written really well. Actually, if you changed the story up a bit - like changed the part about the akuma into something else and changed Allen's and Mana's names - you could probably make this into an actual book.
| The Shuiro Amaya chapter 43 . 11/5/2013
Quite bittersweet with a nice ending; it's interesting to think that Mana and Allen had a life before the circus. Of course, Mana ended up dying differently in this fic, but I believe that it was a nice way for the issue of his death to finally be solved. At the very least, he had time to reconcile with his imminent demise. I also liked the idea you took with Allen going into convulsions because of his innocence. :)
All I can say is that I rather enjoyed this. There were times when I thought of all the other fics waiting in the other open tabs, but you managed to keep me engrossed enough in this day-to-day (not-so-normal) lifestyle that I kept reading.
Good luck with your future endeavors.
| The Weirdo In The Corner chapter 43 . 10/24/2013
Oh dear lord, that was AWESOME! Please make a sequel! ...Please? Pretty please?
| Kyu-Momo chapter 43 . 8/19/2013
That was wonderful!
| SaltWaterSwimmer29 chapter 43 . 6/23/2013
This was a fantastic story! It was a wonderful idea to recount Allen's life from when he met Mana through the point where Mana died. This story really captured my attention and kept me wanting to read more! Great job!
| MaxAngelOfDeath chapter 42 . 6/20/2013
TT WAAAAAAAA M-Mana *hic* rest i-in peace. *hic* TT
| MaxAngelOfDeath chapter 31 . 6/19/2013
ROT IN HELL YOU BASTERD! I'LL LEADCYOU THERE MYSELF, MY NAME IS THERE FOR A REASON! ANGEL OF DEATH, MY JOB IS TO HAVE SOULS FOND THERE RIGHTFUL PLACE, AND YOU BELONG IN THE DEEPEST PLACE IN HELL SMITH!
| MaxAngelOfDeath chapter 27 . 6/19/2013
*alarm sounding* JERK ALERT! JERK ALERT! CREEPEY STALKER COMING! HIDE YOUR KIDS, COULD BE POSSIBLE PEODFILE!
| MaxAngelOfDeath chapter 18 . 6/19/2013
TvT Allen called Mana father.
| CodeName A.N.D.Y chapter 43 . 6/4/2013
I have so much love for this story I think I may have to marry it. Or just marry you…
This is, like, the third time I've read this story and I suddenly realised 'haven't reviewed?!' so here I am. Aaaand, I really have no words to express my thoughts... maybe words like 'Perfect', 'Amazing', and 'asdfghjkl;' but really, it's more than that. It's all those things and others multiplied by a hundred. I'm not even exaggerating.
This will forever be my favourite story. Thank you.
| Icarian chapter 43 . 5/17/2013
This is a fantastic story. It is everything that fan fiction should be but so rarely is.
The pace, development and characterization is beautifully done and the narrative itself is engaging, uplifting and heartbreaking. You have managed to take a relatively minor, undeveloped character and bring him to life, alongside a truly marvelous supporting cast, in such a way that your audience cannot help but love them. I found myself grieving, celebrating and burning in righteous fury alongside Mana.
I enjoyed it immensely. Do let me know if you are ever in need of a beta reader!
| Arette chapter 43 . 5/17/2013
I freaking loved this story. THANK YOU SO MUCH!
And you know what would be amazing(if you haven't done it yet?). If there were a collection of one-shots connecting a bunch of things from this story into fifteen-year-old Allen. I would love that, and a whole ton of others probably would too.