|Reviews for Mana|
| TeenageNeko chapter 21 . 5/27/2010
I've been going back and re-reading parts... poor Allen... cute though.
| TeenageNeko chapter 40 . 5/21/2010
*does double take*
| TeenageNeko chapter 18 . 5/21/2010
I love little Allen : )
| TeenageNeko chapter 13 . 5/21/2010
I love Allen's little "Don't laugh at meeeee..." they're sooo cute :D
| TeenageNeko chapter 5 . 5/21/2010
Oh...I see where this is going...
| HazelinaAmberfire chapter 31 . 4/7/2010
Your fanfiction is the first -Man Fanfiction I've read and I just have to say, it's a good thing I started with it. It got me so into Allen and Mana that all I've been thinking about recently are the two of them. The way you describe the relationship between Mana and Allen just warms my heart and when I finally finished the last page of your fanfiction, I was itching to read more.
I've drawn a little something for you, I hope you like it as much as I loved your fanfiction.
It's Allen calling for Mana during his ugly reunion with Smith.
| Inked Wolf chapter 43 . 3/31/2010
This is a beautiful story, written in a way that isn't over done or insensitive, but some how captures the moment perfectly. The chapter about Mana's dream was one of my favorite parts of the story. The story of Mana was something I haven't seen before, and the way you gave him a real, believable life was a true accomplishment, and a brilliant read. I hope you write more stories like this, because this is something you so rarely find on FanFiction.
Good luck, Inked.
| ShadowDragon94 chapter 43 . 3/24/2010
that's great though you should do a part 2 and like have the after efeects like this the circus group sees Allen with the curse and Cross comes and so on that would be interesting.
| randomfangirlwriting chapter 1 . 2/24/2010
Ah, finally I have enough motivation to write you a review. I don't know how often I read the story, but I enjoy it everytime I'm reading it. I still have to laugh and cry while reading it. The way your telling us your idea of the story of them is pure love and there is so much emotion in it. I also really love fanfiction about Allen and Mana,it's sad we don't know much about him. So I really wanted to thank you for writing this fic,for making me laugh and cry. I really enjoy it,no matter how often I read it. So much respect to you for writing this. I really love this.I think its the best ff I ever read.I love all the happy parts when the two of them are laughing, I love the parts when they are trying to comfort each other. It's awesome how you show the way of Allens way to handle thinks, especially because he really is broken in here.(Btw I like your Idea of Allen being a little pocket thief)
Oh, what I most enjoy to read is the beginning,how Mana found the poor child,gave him a name,little Allen clinging to him and when there starting to coming closer at each other. So much cuteness but still dramatic in its own way.
So enough fangirling, I think you really know now how much I love this.
Ahaha, I'm a hopeless fangirl that is happy that it could read something as awesome as this.
| jackie78 chapter 43 . 2/17/2010
Few stories I have ever read have effected me as much as yours. It was very beautiful, haunting, constantly keeping me on edge. I actually started reading this last night, and I was so caught up in the story that the whole day at classes, all I could think about was this. (Needless to say I rushed home to read.)
Of course, I have no criticism at all for you. It was more then a delight to read, it was an honor, and I thank you for your hard work that was put into this story.
Very clear imagery. It's rare that I cry over a story, fanfiction or not, but this was so heart wrenching that I found myself tearing up on multiple occasions. It's still getting to me.
I felt sick as well, because of how vivid you write Allen's feelings. Most people cannot do that, they can't grasp his character or the pain, but you did such an excellent job..
The result of me desperately trying to read this whole story before I have to go to classes again has resulted in me being pretty tired, so please forgive me for this shotty review! ;_; I love your writing, so... of course, I'll definitely be looking forward to reading your other work. (I can't wait to read the sequel to this!)
I have so many favorite quotes in this story.. I apologize that I'm only putting one here, out of so many brilliant ones in this story.
"There’s good and bad, life and death, all and nothing; I really wish there was room to maneuver, like a grey area, but we live in a black and white world.”
It's been a pleasure. You're an amazing writer, don't forget that. 3
| JessiPon chapter 43 . 12/26/2009
Just thought you'd like to know your story is beautiful, You're a really talented writer. The last part was really good, ha it made me start to cry, Specially when Mana died When I figured out he was dieing I also cried I cant believe I'm such a stupid head for even wring this shit. Well anyway It was really good, I can't believe you even put Cross in... I thought your characters were good also. I felt really happy for Isabella and Nick in the end. Maddie and Ernie were funny. All these feelings you put in this is like you felt them your self before, probably except the dieing and killing thing. Well anyway to sum it up your really awesome and I hope you read your reviews
| Sabathiel chapter 43 . 10/25/2009
I love this story so much! It's so sad what happened to Mana and Allen in the end. Awesome writing!
| skepsis66 chapter 43 . 10/12/2009
Heart-stopping. What a tremendous story you have here! I couldn't stop reading and the journey your words pulled me into was simply magnificent.
| lokiwolf14 chapter 43 . 10/8/2009
may i say that i am blown away! this was one of the best stories ive read in a long time! very very good and very original! A
| xTincampi chapter 43 . 9/2/2009
*sniff* this story was so well written... and so sad... i need to read the other stories you have written )