Reviews for Mana
The hungry Hybrid chapter 43 . 8/25/2009
I know I'm kinda late with reading and reviewing but still...

This is one of the most adorable, heart-twisting story in this genre that I've EVER read! I love it, I'm gonna spend som days on your next story, the one about Cross I think it was. Anyway You're amazing!
lee-uhm chapter 43 . 8/1/2009
Forty-three chapters of pure brilliance. Little Allen has skills. I loved the descriptions in each chapter.
miikkuli chapter 29 . 7/9/2009
Wow. Just..wow...

This chapter was beautiful. oo Especially all the symbols from the future.
Deep Space Cowgirl chapter 43 . 7/5/2009
...(gapes, dumbstruck) You... you are brilliant! I barely know where to start!

First and foremost, I love this story for the characters. Allen and especially Mana seemed almost heartbreakingly real (there were times when I nearly cried because they were in pain) and unlike some of the other things I've read on this site, your original characters were truly that, original. I never had a problem remembering who they were, and ended up liking most of them. I'd love to see a short story where Allen happens to stumble across his 'circus family' after he's joined the Dark Order, I think it would be made of win :)

Secondly (and this probably isn't most people's number two, but hey, I'm a freak) I really loved the way you brought out the darker side of humanity in this story. Mana's nightmares were awesomely creepy (See? I'm a freak.) and I'm more than a bit jealous of how well you portrayed them. I really felt like I was listening to someone tell me about a nightmare they'd actually had. I also really liked the showcase of the Order's overzealousness (And the Ectasy of Saint Teresa, talk about religious art after Cross's own heart, heh). I think I was cheering along with everyone else when Mana took down Smith, despite how very, very wrong it was in some ways. You rock. And on the subject of Smith, or, rather, Allen's childhood prior to Mana's intervention... I think you did a very good job of handling multiple sensitive subjects.

Furthermore, I really appreciate the effort you seem to have made to keep this synched to cannon, while incorporating your own theroies and chatacters. You could easily throw in a small bit of editing here or there to make it perfect... or not and leave it the way it is. (What can I say? For me, it's the attention the author pays to little details that make a story, and in that reguard you are definately a first class author.)

I think the only bad thing I have to say about this is that I wish it was longer! It doesn't really need to be, and I like the way it flows too much to see you really change anything; I just read so quickly that the longer a chapter is, the bigger my smile gets. (For example, I believe I finished this entire story in under five hours. I really am a freak.)

...well, I think I've finally run out of things to say, aside from the fact that I wish this was cannon ;) And now I suppose I'll have to wander off and read everything else you've written. I'm not getting any sleep tonight, you horrible person you. I love you for it, though.
Deep Space Cowgirl chapter 39 . 7/5/2009
...normally I only review the last chapter of completed fics, but when looking through the reviews of this specific chapter on a whim, I was surprised that no one guessed tuberculosis/consumption for Mana's illness. As soon as he started coughing up blood, that was the first thing I thought of. Nice pick, too... it can take years for someone to die of that, and I love the way you've been foreshadowing it in previous chapters :)
Red Slinky chapter 43 . 7/5/2009
Nu! Oh god! This nearly made me cry!

This is one of the most awsome storys I have ever read! Only some things can make me cry, I don't cry that easily...

-Runs to your next story-

You are so now one of fave authors! -click-
Red Slinky chapter 39 . 7/5/2009
Aw, POOR MANA! He's dying... No... Sad face. :(

Mana is now my fave! Then Allen, then Lavi then Tim then Linalee... And Yu is in there somewhere I think. Happy face.

Sad face. Mana wont see Allen grow up...
Red Slinky chapter 38 . 7/5/2009
YES! Maddie is FAR better than Marie! She is awesome-er, and cool-er, and... I need a thesaurus... nice-er, friendly-er, good-er kind-er... oh! AND MORE PLEASANT! Yes, that's the perfect word! Maddie is more pleasant than Marie! Yay for thesaurus! :D
Red Slinky chapter 34 . 7/5/2009
I have now lost ALL respect for Marie.
Red Slinky chapter 30 . 7/4/2009
Wait a min... Allen was... Smith, he didn't... Smith...

-waveing arms around in confusion-

So Allen... When Mana.. Smith did it, didn't he? Oh, that bastard...

NOT COOL MAN!

NOT.

COOL.
Red Slinky chapter 28 . 7/4/2009
Oh!

OH!

Not akuma's! I SEE!

And The blood coughing fit thingy... Yeah, I'm confused about what it is... But w/e! Happy face. Lol.
Red Slinky chapter 25 . 7/4/2009
-points at Chuck confused-

Akuma?

?
Red Slinky chapter 24 . 7/4/2009
-points at the bishop acusingly-

AKUMA! Sad face. Lol...
Red Slinky chapter 10 . 7/4/2009
-grins- YAY! Mana has a girlfriend! And I'm glad he didn't take advatage of Marie... Otherwise I wouldn't like him as much :D! Lol.

Mana is slowly becoming my fave now... Next to Linalee, River and Allen himself 3

Slinky~
Red Slinky chapter 9 . 7/3/2009
It's me loged in! :)

This is my fave chappie so far! So... so cute!
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