Reviews for Mana
Guest chapter 16 . 12/18/2015
Akuma akuma akuma akuma her son turned into an akuma because he was sad akuma I just know it -_- and if allen did anything he... sensed the akuma? Maybe he killed it... maybe
Guest chapter 13 . 12/18/2015
I-I just read the beginning and im commenting now... your gonna kill him... NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO T_T WHY
Guest chapter 11 . 12/18/2015
Awwww imagining little allen playing with a fuzzy bear ~ kawaiiiiii~
Guest chapter 10 . 12/18/2015
Yay! What if marie becomes allens mom? Hmmm that would take allen a while to get comfortable with I think... oh well o to chapter 11! Lol im this far in like 1 day
Guest chapter 9 . 12/18/2015
How about you move to Canada? Slavery is illegal there & so is child abuse
Guest chapter 8 . 12/18/2015
Aww cute~ I hope theres a chapter where maria meets allen & she like him or just acts nice to allen at least
Guest chapter 7 . 12/18/2015
lol she made him a believer xD
Guest chapter 6 . 12/18/2015
"Deep red wine" THATS RACISTS
Guest chapter 3 . 12/18/2015
I feel like that mana is a bit ooc but I think it matches since he hates his job and has pretty much a crappy life
The Writing Prokaryote chapter 43 . 10/17/2015
... *in silent rage, but happy at the same time*
The Writing Prokaryote chapter 34 . 10/17/2015

He's not really gonna end up as 'the Allen exorcist' like in Mana's he?
The Writing Prokaryote chapter 21 . 10/17/2015
...Okay. I get this sneaking suspicion that this Isabella is actually Allen's mum...
...though I might just be paranoid. XD
The Writing Prokaryote chapter 20 . 10/17/2015
Something terrible, horrible, painful, excruciatingly frustrating...something like that is going to happen. Most likely in the next chapter. I just know it, I'm gonna bawl my eyes out or something...I CAN FEEL THE OMINOUS FEELING... TTTT This story is amazing...
lizyeh2000 chapter 43 . 5/7/2015
Loved your story , now favourited!
Oblitus Angeli chapter 32 . 4/24/2015
Ya know, at the beginning of the story, I thought Smith was Cross. Now I'm kinda glad I'm wrong... Though if I was in Mana's place there wouldn't /be/ a body. Though I'd have to find a place to hide the flame thrower and I'd have to vacuum up the ashes... 'Course then I'd have to get rid of the smell :/ And to quote Abridged Kirito (SAO) "You see, there's no need to wonder where your god is! 'Cause he's right here, and he's fresh out of mercy." Something that Mana said reminded me of it And little Allen! Oh he's so very messed up and needs a hug. And it seems that my go-to response when something bad happens to one of my favorite characters is to hug them... To me, this fic seems like a prequel to the series, just sayin'. And I knew his girlfriend was gonna leave! I never really liked her (and nether did Allen.)... I hope nothing bad happens to him again. Though knowing his luck, it's likely something bad is gonna happen to him again before the end of the story :/

I started reading this yesterday morning and now I've only got 12 chapters left T-T wish there was more XD
Wow that was long xD
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