Reviews for Mana
Guest chapter 17 . 12/18/2015
Lol MANA WHAT ARE YOU TEACHING ALLEN sheesh good thing rivka is there or else who knows who thinhs would-a turned out
Guest chapter 16 . 12/18/2015
Akuma akuma akuma akuma her son turned into an akuma because he was sad akuma I just know it -_- and if allen did anything he... sensed the akuma? Maybe he killed it... maybe
Guest chapter 13 . 12/18/2015
I-I just read the beginning and im commenting now... your gonna kill him... NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO T_T WHY
Guest chapter 11 . 12/18/2015
Awwww imagining little allen playing with a fuzzy bear ~ kawaiiiiii~
Guest chapter 10 . 12/18/2015
Yay! What if marie becomes allens mom? Hmmm that would take allen a while to get comfortable with I think... oh well o to chapter 11! Lol im this far in like 1 day
Guest chapter 9 . 12/18/2015
How about you move to Canada? Slavery is illegal there & so is child abuse
Guest chapter 8 . 12/18/2015
Aww cute~ I hope theres a chapter where maria meets allen & she like him or just acts nice to allen at least
Guest chapter 7 . 12/18/2015
lol she made him a believer xD
Guest chapter 6 . 12/18/2015
"Deep red wine" THATS RACISTS
Guest chapter 3 . 12/18/2015
I feel like that mana is a bit ooc but I think it matches since he hates his job and has pretty much a crappy life
The Writing Prokaryote chapter 43 . 10/17/2015
... *in silent rage, but happy at the same time*
The Writing Prokaryote chapter 34 . 10/17/2015
AAALLLEEEENNNNNNNNN...

He's not really gonna end up as 'the Allen exorcist' like in Mana's dreams...is he?
The Writing Prokaryote chapter 21 . 10/17/2015
...Okay. I get this sneaking suspicion that this Isabella is actually Allen's mum...
...though I might just be paranoid. XD
The Writing Prokaryote chapter 20 . 10/17/2015
Something terrible, horrible, painful, excruciatingly frustrating...something like that is going to happen. Most likely in the next chapter. I just know it, I'm gonna bawl my eyes out or something...I CAN FEEL THE OMINOUS FEELING... TTTT This story is amazing...
lizyeh2000 chapter 43 . 5/7/2015
Loved your story , now favourited!
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