Reviews for Mana
sapphireswimming chapter 38 . 11/26/2012
Ack. So many feelz from this chapter. That was a really freaky fit for Allen... and finding uot that he's been dealing with this the entire time is no good. But the bits with Maddie are so sweet. She's so much better than Marie ever was.
sapphireswimming chapter 37 . 11/26/2012
I hate seeing Mana getting worse and worse as the story goes on. Because this isn't nothing. But at least he's having a great time and Allen's having fun and they're almost a real family. :)
sapphireswimming chapter 36 . 11/26/2012
Oh this was really good. It was sad seeing the setbacks and how much Allen doesn't understand some things. But it's going to be okay. Mana's being amazing about all of this.
sapphireswimming chapter 35 . 11/26/2012
Well, I'm glad that worked out. These guys are all one huge happy dysfunctional family. And it's really fun to see. But it will all be okay now. :)
sapphireswimming chapter 34 . 11/25/2012
I. Love. Allen.

The kid's a genius.
sapphireswimming chapter 33 . 11/25/2012
Well, it would only make sense for Mana to start dreaming about killing people... monsters... things... too.
sapphireswimming chapter 32 . 11/25/2012
Oh wow. Yes, things are happening quickly. I really loved the scene in the pawn shop. So funny. XD Definitely a needed break amid the craziness of the story.
sapphireswimming chapter 31 . 11/25/2012
Ah. So that's how it happened. Mana really transformed there, didn't he? It was completely understandable, though.
sapphireswimming chapter 30 . 11/25/2012
Murphy. Everything that can go wrong, will.

That is the most horrible turn that this story could take. And yet. It makes perfect sense. And my earlier statement stands a hundred fold: I hate Smith. But Allen's comment after the earlier incident makes so much more sense now.

But poor Allen. And poor Mana... knowing exactly why he wasn't there.
sapphireswimming chapter 29 . 11/25/2012
Oh gosh. He's having the same dreams Allen does in the actual story. That's just a little freaky. And seeing older Allen... especially looking like THAT... must have been the freakiest thing ever for the poor guy. And would make Allen's response even that much more harrowing. Wow.
sapphireswimming chapter 28 . 11/25/2012
Oh my gosh. What a revelation. Things are starting to get hairy. Eek. Chuck revealing everything... well, not quite everything because who would believe THAT... and then dying. wow.
sapphireswimming chapter 27 . 11/25/2012
Oh gosh. That's so sad. I'm glad that Allen is able to see the situation perfectly, though, and is helping Isabella out. They had too much fun with Mana! XD I'm hoping that this means what I was scared of won't happen. But then of course the Bishop is coming around...
sapphireswimming chapter 26 . 11/25/2012
Ah, things are moving onward. And I hate Mana's dreams.

Loved the phrasing of this line, though: The best case scenario would mean having to use a cane to assist in walking; the worst would mean that there would be no need for a cane, for there would be no walking at all.
sapphireswimming chapter 25 . 11/25/2012
Errrr... that was a really uncomfortable chapter. Not how you wrote it- it was great- but just what happened. Things are going to go downhill from here. (nuuu!)
sapphireswimming chapter 24 . 11/25/2012
OH MY GOSH. What just happened? That was... oh gosh... that's not good... what... who... why...

AHHHHHHHHHHH.
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