Reviews for Naruto of the Nine Tails |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Bit rough in the early chapters with all the long AN's but certainly an enjoyable fic overall. looking forward to more |
![]() ![]() ![]() if it weren't for the stupid AN's I would still read this |
![]() ![]() ![]() interesting read pretty good if I had to say |
![]() ![]() ![]() Lot of words for a story to read like a crack fic |
![]() ![]() ![]() Awesome work |
![]() ![]() ![]() Excellent chapter! Looking forward to the next one |
![]() ![]() ![]() at least this explain the reasons why sarutobi dint do what he wanted... and beat up everyone who abused the boy... i am adhering this explanation on my headcannon |
![]() ![]() ![]() This is damn good and I hope it gets updated soon |
![]() ![]() ![]() Sorry I don’t believe Naruto wouldn’t have killed Neji before allowing his chibi to be this injured. Total suspension of disbelief |
![]() ![]() ![]() thank you for the update. please keep this going. i always repeat the Bacon scene after the invasion to cheer my wife up. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Wow. Binged this over the past day or so. Fantastic stuff. |
![]() ![]() ![]() So overall, quite an interesting chapter. I strongly disagree with the second omake because Konoha, being a mercenary military village, cannot operate in that way (no military leader could be that weak and powerless in what is essentially a military state, and only in a Republic or Democracy could he be handicapped so badly. Which again, Konoha is not since the people don't elect anyone except maybe a civilian council that represents, to the military leadership, their concerns and nothing more. And the leadership is chosen mostly by the previous leader or the other major power of the land, the daimyo.) But other then that, interesting. I wonder how naruto could operate in such a matter, where his brain is seemingly incapable of giving output despite him obviously operating to the degree he is. quite a mystery indeed. We'll have to see what happens down the line, won't we? |
![]() ![]() ![]() Well could Naruto use is chakra pathway to surcome vent Nero-pathway in brain instead ? |
![]() ![]() ![]() Happy Holidays, EDelta! *huge warm grin* Omake: While the trio were having their discussion a being earing a burn orange jumpsuit with blue highlights appeared as if out of nowhere, and coughed/ahemmed to let them know of his presence. "Excuse me? Pardon the intrusion, but the boss has both kind-a merged with the Kyuubi and has become a "kit" as it were, and.." here the 'clone' rubbed the back of its head sheepishly(?)/Abashedly(?) then continued after the "WHAT!?"s and "Explain!/Explain yourself, gaki!"s: "There's me. Technically an OC by the writer of this omake. *cheesy grin* I go by 'Jack Rose', or Jacrose', and.. umm... I guess that.. currently? I am what Boss's/Naruto's 'brain' should be at at this time." Jacrose puts his hands up defensively "WHOA THERE! I am just an idea that may help things along if ya want Naruto both 'Back in action normally, and want him to 'study further'. *sighs* Look this isn't easy for Jostanos to write either. He is basically pulling this omake out of his rear end to have something to add to this already fantastic story." Please continue when you may, EDelta, and you may use this omake, or bits of it, as you like. :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() Ah shit, is he gonna use the impure world reincarnation jutsu. This is a very bad Idea I dont imagine their gonna be too happy to get summoned nor what they were summoned for |