Reviews for Negative Halo, Part One: Institution
Jaal Ama Darav chapter 14 . 4/23/2016
A good last chapter and a good end to a great story.

I really liked the story and the characters. You did a very good job, this could easily be a very good Halo novel.
Jaal Ama Darav chapter 13 . 4/23/2016
Another good chapter.

The last trial is surly the harshest of the three, a final test.

Onto the last chapter...
Jaal Ama Darav chapter 12 . 4/23/2016
Another very good chapter.

You know, sometimes I get the bad feeling something horrible is about to happen to a character when they're nicer than most. Like what happened to Judge 'Cafalae.

Fulsa does have a strong point- the rings are the Master Chief said once before: “The rings will kill us all.”

I wonder what Orine will do now...
Jaal Ama Darav chapter 11 . 4/22/2016
Another good chapter.

Not surprised by his outburst, considering things...

Onto the next chapter.
Jaal Ama Darav chapter 10 . 4/22/2016
Another good chapter.

Bringing news back...that must be hard...
Jaal Ama Darav chapter 9 . 4/22/2016
Another good chapter, action packed too.

Hada died...that has to be hard to see a comrade die like that...
Jaal Ama Darav chapter 8 . 4/22/2016
Another good chapter.

Looks like he is finally going to the front lines...I imagine its going to get crazy...
Jaal Ama Darav chapter 7 . 4/22/2016
A good chapter.

I thought the Head Master was out to get him, and it sure sounds like it. Giving him a most dishonorable duty...
Jaal Ama Darav chapter 6 . 4/22/2016
Another good chapter.

He's so in trouble, I don't see this ending well...
Jaal Ama Darav chapter 5 . 4/21/2016
Very good chapter.

Onto the next one!
Jaal Ama Darav chapter 4 . 4/21/2016
A very good chapter.

Your story is very creative. I can only imagine back when you started the story that there wasn't as much about the Elites as today. I got the Halo games around 2009, and the books later on.
Jaal Ama Darav chapter 3 . 4/21/2016
Another good chapter, onto the next one!
Jaal Ama Darav chapter 2 . 4/21/2016
Another good chapter.

I noticed this was written way back in 2007, before many of the books that gave more insight into the Halo universe. I looked at the reviews and it looks like there were some errors, but oh well. It's something that happens when one has to explore the unknown. Will read and comment on the chapters and say at the end what I think.

So far its good.
Jaal Ama Darav chapter 1 . 4/20/2016
A good start.

Now that the test is over...what awaits? Onto te next chapter!
pointvee chapter 14 . 6/13/2015
Thank you for both breaking my heart and making me smile with this story. It was beautiful.
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