Reviews for The Tease
SwirlyDragonfly chapter 2 . 3/23/2007
sexion chapter 2 . 3/23/2007
Ahaha, Jiraiya. .

Oh geez, I was laughing the whole way through this. They're in trouble! XD

Hehe, yeah. Anyway, this is actually the first main pariring ShikaTema fic I've read- it was good.
star's dreams chapter 2 . 3/23/2007
SD: Holy Heaven and the beings living in it, that was funny. Shikamaru may had a chance if Naruto haven't seen it. Everybody going to know, including his mom. He is so screwed.

But I can't stop laughing, it so wrong but it feel so right.
Random Zaku Pilot chapter 2 . 3/23/2007
lmao i really believe you should add more man this is great if you can plz add more
Everwaking chapter 2 . 3/23/2007
lol are you sure you wont do another?its funny
zackaroni chapter 1 . 3/21/2007
uh-oh! cant wait to see how shika's gonna get out of this one!
emily chapter 1 . 3/21/2007
it was good pleas make anouther chapter
twistedNEK0 chapter 1 . 3/21/2007
Oh Snap...Gaara. O_O Poor Shika...

Awesome start. I havent read anything SHikamaruxTemari related in a while, but I love those two to pieces. Can't wait to see the next chapter.
ClubSauce chapter 1 . 3/20/2007
awesome! its a two shot! update soon.
Cashmeritan chapter 1 . 3/20/2007
LOVE LOVE /LOVE/ IT! Update or else I'll be sad. D
hellbunnyxxx chapter 1 . 3/20/2007
Lovely! What about a lemon or lime sequel?
RandomLuv chapter 1 . 3/20/2007
lol i love it. ah shikamaru just has the worst of luck doesn't he?
Shika's Rape Victim chapter 1 . 3/20/2007



Poor can be so mean.

But dont get me wrong.

I am a shikaxtema fan(( could be a lame pun)
trombonista chapter 1 . 3/20/2007
I think you should start writing that second chapter. The romance is great and Shikamaru is IC.
Midnight Memories chapter 1 . 3/20/2007

Wow, that was hilarious XD I loved the last line!

Good story, I think the rating is okay.

Keep on writing!

Take care~
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