Reviews for The Tease
64teeth chapter 2 . 10/21/2011
that was so funny and reversed! i loved it:D
jamie chapter 2 . 5/21/2011
I love this part: Her eyes widened as she saw more people standing behind him; Uzumaki Naruto and Haruno Sakura were gazing at their display, shocked, while the legendary Sannin Jiraiya was busy taking notes in a small black notebook, a perverted smile across his face. She groaned. Oh god, this is going into one of those perverted books he writes . . .
Inori chapter 2 . 7/29/2010
loved it~ great chemistry in the scene thats talent
Rix94 chapter 2 . 1/30/2010
plz make a 3rd chapter it would b so funny. Explaninh it to the hokage.
Luiza chapter 1 . 12/20/2009
I have just one thing to say, I love your story!
Shinichi06 chapter 2 . 11/13/2009
dude i love this! :D
zere chapter 2 . 9/17/2009
Nice!can u continue man pls!
mari-ness chapter 2 . 8/17/2009
Jess chapter 2 . 7/15/2009
(L) it !
Jess chapter 1 . 7/15/2009

so funny & HOT :P , i wish you wrote about gaara and shikamaru (L)
NaraTemari011 chapter 2 . 7/8/2009
Wow. This fic was...very different from all the other ones I've read...but that doesn't mean I didn't like it!

I definetley didn't know Temari had a side like that O.O

And Gaara's line when he found them on the desk had me laughing a lot!

LightDarkDragon chapter 2 . 6/20/2009
*Snickers* So like Temari, and Shikimaru for that matter. Your a great writer, it would pain me if you were to stop writing. Many people aren't able to keep the actual character in line with how they truely act, a problem I will be facing when I finally start to write. congradulations.
Lives-In-2D chapter 1 . 6/5/2009

Temari's such a bitch to Shika! Heehee! GO TEMA! WOOT! :D

Kawaii story with horny bits! Thumbs up!
Anime Onnanoko chapter 2 . 1/3/2009
lol aw poor Shikamaru and Temari, just as they were getting in the mood, great story!
Zara chapter 2 . 10/12/2008
This story is very well written and I soo love it especially since it's 4 sharin...
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