|Reviews for Counting the Minutes|
| MyImmortalMajor chapter 1 . 5/19/2010
Hee hee cute! :D 3
| Dr. Fang's Girl chapter 1 . 11/4/2009
that was so cute and adorable! you wrote the characters well. it sounded like how bella would act, how alice would act, how edward would act.
| SuNgLaSsEs-ChI'c chapter 1 . 7/19/2007
U got Alice down just right!
| AnAerialView chapter 1 . 6/26/2007
Aww. This was sweet. My favorite part is when Edward says, "Because I'm here". That was just so cute! But Edward probably messed up Bella's make-up...lol I also really like the parts where Alice tells Edward and Bella not to do anything that Rosalie and Emmett would do (lol) and where Alice uses her better sarcasm by saying that Bella had been away from Edward for a whole forty minutes. But I think that better than the latter was the part when Edward said that he hadn't been away from Bella from a whole fifty minutes and then corrected himself by saying fiftyone. That made Bella (and me!) smile. Awws. lol Good job on the mix of humor with romance. I do think that you stooped the fanfiction too early for it to be considered a passionate scene, but it is definitely some really good fluff. ;D :D
| Pereo Angelus chapter 1 . 6/2/2007
I've red it before, but it's just so good!
| Kalona Cullen chapter 1 . 4/6/2007
why aren't you writing more chapters to this? it is really good...i'm going to read your other one now!
| misskiana chapter 1 . 3/30/2007
hahha i liked it. it was sweet and cute...and i like the "don't do anything emmett and rosalie wouldn't do" that pretty much opens a lot of doors for them. ehhehe i also love how edward was counting to minutes. so sweet!
| FaithAdeline chapter 1 . 3/23/2007
aww, so cute! I really liked it, although there could have been more ;) lol. Going to read finality now!
| Shattered Mirror01 chapter 1 . 3/23/2007
Hallo, it's Snick!
I liked it. It was much shorter than I thought it would be, but oh well. It was so cute! It's definitely something they'd do I think.
I can't count time worth crap, now that I think about it, actually.
Hope ya get out of the funk soon!
| Jedijen66 chapter 1 . 3/23/2007
she's so lucky! when i marry my edward (i have one!) i'm gonna be as lucky as her!
| Tech-Man chapter 1 . 3/21/2007
Wonderful story I loved it those two are just two cute together.
| BlackRoseThorne chapter 1 . 3/21/2007
*giggles insanely* Keithlee, I loved it! I will now dream happy, fluffy, drabble-like dreams, seeing as it is...2:09 am. I really like the way you had him outside the door. I like it when Edward gets impatiant. It's cute. Loved it lots! Dude, seriously, finish Finality so I can read it, kay? I know, I know. By the end of the year. Well, seeya! In...a couple of hours. I sleep now.
| Liz Night-Cullen chapter 1 . 3/20/2007
NO NO NO! IT CAN NOT BE A ONE SHOT/SHORT FIC, ITS TOO GOOD! I LOVE IT, YOU ROCK AT WRITING NOW FUCHKING WRITE SOME MORE OR I'LL SUE YOU! No, really, i won't but you should continue it...
| not done baking chapter 1 . 3/20/2007
That wasn't passionate... that was fluffy. And there wasn't much Bella/Edward going on... what did Edward do during those 51 minutes, still cute though.
| Adieu l'apathie chapter 1 . 3/20/2007
lol. Counting the minutes. Lovely lil' chappy.