Reviews for Picking up the pieces
Solace in the Chaos chapter 1 . 8/13/2012
I loved the alternate ending.
This may seem a little dark...but you should write some horror, or the equivalent, it would rock my purple, fluffy socks right off.
CharmingKarma chapter 1 . 1/9/2011
*sniffles* Great job!
TARIGARMA12 chapter 1 . 9/20/2010
omg i finished reading the second ending and just stared at the could you do that...poor luffy such a sad end..:( but i liked the story :)
1337kitsune chapter 1 . 2/21/2010
Second ending made me stare and shock and horror, than I lauged when I read your comment, it was so funny, oh God, I've become sadastic...Oh well. This was awesome! I like first ending better, it's just me and my happily ever afters go well together, I can't do agnst endings, though you can apperantly...Nice Job Plushie-chan.
LunaticV chapter 1 . 12/14/2009
i really can't imagine Luffy being 28...

well, that was a hard thing for Zoro...

i admit, the alternate ending was really good, and it gave more emotion to the fic. but, what i'm most grateful at is that that was the ALTERNATE ending, and being out AFTER the happy ending. if you have put the real ending where zoro died, i'll be really disappointed, and maybe complain or sth... XP

still, it was nice
crazy34 chapter 1 . 8/24/2008
Aha, I loved both endings!

The cute one was adorable, but I also liked the alternative ending. And it was kinda like that song! I love that song!

darkelf1600 chapter 1 . 9/22/2007
oh, that was so sad! But it was really good.

I liked the original ending more, but that's because deep down I'm a real sap. But the alternate was good too.
Greater Beast Zelas Metallium chapter 1 . 7/14/2007
te angst ending rules!

of course... that's my 'writer' side talking... 'cause the other ending (the happy one) made my other side smile a lot...

perfect work... I love your stories... please keep writing like that! n_n
TreeStar chapter 1 . 5/6/2007
Nice! I think i like the second ending better from a literary standpoint, but the first one you chose made me smile, so i'm glad you put both up. Nice AU, nice use of the characters, nice plot, great grammar and structure. your pacing was really smooth and transitions worked well. I would love to see you write a chapter AU with the characters designed in much the same way as this, but actively working. Zoro an assassin by night, and luffy knows about it, and stands by zoro through everything whilst trying to convince him to stop his job if it doesn't make him happy. That they could maybe run away together instead to get away from zoro's boss and they could be fugivites from the mob or whatever. wouldn't that be interesting? I'd write it myself, but i work six days a week and seriously doubt i'd ever have time to do it. :) But if i could, i'd make it dark. love in a pitch black world. THAT's a neat mood to establish. :)

This is fantastic. one of the best AU oneshots i've ever read in fanfiction. :)
PirateKing81 chapter 1 . 5/3/2007
YAY! i have noticed with your alternate's a sad one...but that's ok, cuz i'd much rather have Zoro and Luffy together then one of them dead...
Cloud-Ima chapter 1 . 5/2/2007
AW SHIT! I'M CRYING! XD Seriously, I am. This is just... Wow. That's what I have to say about this is "wow". Great job!
3xPyroxKatanas chapter 1 . 4/17/2007
nice... poor luffy and zoro going on my favorites! now that i think about it i should put you on my favorite authors... hooray for you, you're the first one on it...
Some Girl101 chapter 1 . 4/14/2007
*cries* That 2nd ending was so sad. T.T

I liked the fluffy cute one a lot though.

But wow, the whole fic was really well written. XP

Great job!~
Ebil-Baka chapter 1 . 4/13/2007
T.T no way, i definitely love the alternate ending but it makes me want to cry at the same time...poor zoro...
LetsEatScabbers chapter 1 . 3/25/2007 have killed a piece of my soul and i am honestly crying right now.

but it was so good
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