Reviews for Canadian Digidestined
PhoenixLord05 chapter 55 . 3/4/2013
I really do not know what to think about it...
Okay the first most obvious plot hole to point out is: how can the Canadian Digidestine speak Japense? I mean they are going to Japen and they do not even think for a moment, "What if they speak Japenese..." I also have to comment one another thing... The Crest of Miracles is the STRONGEST crest, even more powerful than Light and Hope. I can understand if you want to say that Compassion is almost as strong as Light and Hope but Miracles is stronger than all three of them. Also I think that the story was really good but the plot had some loose ends to it but what really bugged me was the characters. I really hated Jenn and thought that she was a stuck up bitch, her obsession of Kris did not help. It was mostly the way you portrayed her that was the problem. I have no real problem with OCs I just have a problem with how they are portrayed. Yes I will call a Mary Sue when I see one and you are very close with Kris. I have nothing against him, just him not having goggles and being the soccer jock type of guy, it was almost painful to read when he digivolved with Leomon, really painful especially when he does not do it again. I also like it when the person describes every character in the story so I do not have to go online to see what it looks like. I also almost died when I read and read, the intire story just not to really get a good grip on what type of person any of your OCs that aren't Kris and Jenn because when you start to only focus on some characters and not on them, the plot tends to crumble. So my suggestion is to let all of your characters shine equally as much because when I read it I almost cried since all of the story was mostly about Jenn/Kris and it was like you were trying to force feed it to your readers and if I could I would tell the same thing to Rick. I HATE PERCABETH! Anyways I also think you might want to cheek it over for spelling mistakes and I do not want you to take this as a flame because that's not what I want it to be. You did really good on the story but it still needs help saving so I hope I helped, even if you don't need anymore. Yoshi!
Skitz and mouse chapter 57 . 12/28/2002
THIS WAS THE GRETEST STORY WE HAVE EVER READ! WE ENJOYED ALL OF IT AND WE WERE LIKE CRYING WHEN IT WAS COMING TO AN END. WE HAVE BEEN FAITHFULLY CHECKING AND WAITING FOR THE SEQUEL AND FOR YOU TO FINISH THE PREQUEL. WE HAVE ALSO READ THE ALTERNATE ENDING. YOU ARE AN AMAZING WRITER! PLEASE CONTINUE BECAUSE WE ADORE YOUR CANADIAN DIGIDESTINED WORK! THANKS FOR CREATING SUCH A WONDERFUL MASTERPIECE AND WE LOOK FORWARD TO READING MORE IN THE FUTURE!
LEGENDRY chapter 3 . 11/4/2002
This is pretty good, but you messed up. The black version of Gatomon is called Blaktailmon, not Black Gatomon.
cswike chapter 57 . 9/18/2002
Great story! I'm not a fan of the series-quite the opposite, actually-so I kinda looked on this sort of project with a critical eye. The only reason I even found it was that I read your Super Smash Bros. story. I must say, you managed to write an extremely impressive story that even I admire. Keep on writing.
Alan Wilkinson chapter 56 . 9/5/2002
Oh I doubt the forces of darkness are finished with everyone quite yet. Surprised it'll take twenty years though...
Alan Wilkinson chapter 55 . 9/5/2002
Hmm. That's a lot of digidestined. :)
Alan Wilkinson chapter 54 . 9/5/2002
It's actually spelt "Ophanimon" (without the 'r'). Good chapter. One last bit of continuity to go.
Alan Wilkinson chapter 53 . 9/5/2002
Gah. They're running out of Mega's. Nice Plan, Emily.
Alan Wilkinson chapter 52 . 9/5/2002
*chuckle* Yeah, figues she'd be back. Thank the 4 they've got SkullMammothmon
Alan Wilkinson chapter 51 . 9/5/2002
Couple of things: 1) I would have only called this a 'R' myself, 2) Sorry about the whining over Imperial Dramon in the earlier reviews. I should have realised it was a little too early for him.
Alan Wilkinson chapter 50 . 9/4/2002
Yeah, but one couple has alreeady had it's lemon. Anyway, I'll continue this tomorrow.
Alan Wilkinson chapter 49 . 9/4/2002
Not bad. Well, better read part 4 before they kick me off the library computer.
Alan Wilkinson chapter 48 . 9/4/2002
You know, this would have been a perfect chance for Andrew to get Gran Kuwagamon. Oh Well. And I''m really not going to be able to enjoy the next chapter (now I REALLY wanna sulk... :( )
Alan Wilkinson chapter 47 . 9/4/2002
Ok, Angela was making a serious pain of herself.
Alan Wilkinson chapter 46 . 9/4/2002
Is it a good idea to have too teams without a Mega? Anyway, on with the show...
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