Reviews for Harry Potter and the Light in the Dark
Guest chapter 4 . 4/25
Change his name harry potter is not a good name for a star wars character.
Doc scherer chapter 2 . 2/11
Decent story so far but please for the love of god use spell check. Spell check is your friend it helps you.
Bronze chapter 1 . 9/15/2016
I find it extremely interesting now that Harry's vanished Dumbles investigate his living conditions. McGonagall told him the Dursley's were unfit to raise ANY child but he ignored her. Lily herself told him Petunia hated her because of her magic on numerous occasions. And he ignored her as well. Now Harry's gone and Dumbles feels he failed. The man is always a day late and a dollar short. He walks around with rose colored glasses as well as blinders on and somehow thinks he knows what's going on.
Bronze chapter 2 . 9/15/2016
Good story except for the spelling errors. Plac instead of place, rom instead of room things like that confuse most people. Why they don't me I have no idea! Not like it's gonna matter anymore. It's been over half a decade since the last update so I'm pretty sure this is dead.
Bronze chapter 1 . 9/7/2016
Amazing! The old goat molester and sex partner suddenly realize that he made a mistake! Time to retire and use a blasting spell on his own head to ensure that he can never hart a child through hubris again.
Guest chapter 4 . 3/22/2016
Tulak Hord. Was a dark lord of the Sith in the old republic
TheDeadGirlRisen chapter 11 . 1/3/2016
Yes Succumb to the dark side... XD Dark Harry please
Guest chapter 4 . 6/22/2015
Manipulative Dumbles and dark/evil harry please p.s love the story :)
Ardianna Keeper chapter 11 . 6/2/2015
Removing Harry's arm was totally unnecessary, wizards can regrow bones it would have been better for harry to do that, nerve damage would have been a easy fix and frankly giving him a Skywalker arm is just lame. Excluding magic in the KOTOR games you can bring yourself back from death with a simple force healing. Removing Harrys arm is lazy in terms of lore, lame cause its been done so many times plus the Jedi frown upon loosing limbs, as Harry was raised by Jedi he should not have been so eager to replace the limb just because it hurt! Broken bones hurt, my Dad fractured is shin into MANY little pieces and with our level of technology the doctors put it back together. This whole incident was out of place and could have been handled so much better, you took the lazy way out, which seems to be a running trend in this fic. Do you really think anything out? Be mindful of the consequences of Harry's actions? I'm amazed he's gotten away with what he had, he certainly does NOT act like a Jedi or someone that has been trained to be a Jedi. I'm inclined to agree with Snape at this point, Harry is a brat pure and simple. That said this story has some very interesting points and is fun to read, when the grammar is decent enjoy that I can figure out what you are trying to say. A recommendation from on author to another, think things through, slow down and take your time. Its this kind of terrible grammar and pure lazy writing that gives nonfiction a bad name. This story could very easily be brilliant! As a story it is quite good(minus your grammar issues) but it could be brilliant, it was only Harry chopping off his arm that was the final straw. I wish you good luck with this story and I apologize for my rudeness but it needed saying. As a community we can not improve if people are afraid to give constructive critism.
Ardianna Keeper chapter 4 . 6/1/2015
Good gods, EDIT this is worse then my first drafts. This looks like you haven't even bothered to reread it.
informationbooth chapter 11 . 10/25/2014
darth malak or malak was born to the name Alek. just as jedi master kreia becomes darth traya. just thought id let you know.

22 out
happenstance chapter 8 . 10/25/2014
you do realise that that would make Fawkes a gay phoenix. I live Down Under so I'm just telling you now the colourful birds native to Australia are male, the majority of females look dull and grey in comparison.
Hawklan chapter 11 . 9/8/2014
nice story so far and an artificial arm on a boy of elven? that means constant adjustment to it in regards
to Harry growing...hope that there will be more to this sometime
Hawklan chapter 5 . 7/4/2014
quite nice fic so far, thank you for sharing and now I have to get the rest to read :)
WhiteElfElder chapter 11 . 1/22/2014
So, Harry will become a Grey Jedi, or will he go Dark?
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