Reviews for Fracture
Guest chapter 9 . 6/25/2014
Great story! Start up-dating it again and finish it!
SaucePear chapter 9 . 1/20/2012
Great story!

I hope you plan to update this, I'm really looking forward to seeing how you progress all the threads. I particularly like your portrayal of Azula, she's so hard to do well and your characterization feels very natural.

Thank you for sharing this, I hope to read more of it!
demonic angel23 chapter 9 . 9/29/2011
awesome story! D

i hope you can update this soon!
Scar-Faced Hundred chapter 9 . 5/21/2011
I am in love with this story. Just to let you know. :)
wolfiegirl83 chapter 9 . 2/18/2011
This is a great story so far; you've stayed very true to the characters in the actual series. I've enjoyed reading this far, and hope to see more very soon!
JustALittleTwisted chapter 9 . 2/13/2011
Wow, great story! It's well written and the characterization is great. Seriously, how come you don't have twice as many reviews? I can't understand it. You completely deserve more. Hope you update soon!
ahschung chapter 7 . 1/30/2011
great chapter!
Vaneria Potter chapter 7 . 11/26/2010
I know how that goes.

My twin had special needs, and my parents had to go to the top of the board of Education and threaten to take them to court before the idiots would give her the help she needed.

[Personal Rant Over]

I am seriously loving this story. I don't know how to describe it, but it draws you in and refuses to let go. It looks like tonight is going to be a late one, because I started this in the evening, and it is going to be one of those fics that I can't put down.
cinemascope08 chapter 9 . 10/26/2010
Post the next chapter please! I love it!
Deja Know I Been Lookin For Vu chapter 9 . 10/4/2010
I hope you haven't abandoned this story, as it really is a lot of fun!

The adventure between Katara and Zuko is great, though it's horrible what Azula did to poor Katara. At least she's recovered, and I have hope for Iroh's escape yet!

There are a lot of amusing spots you've done really well with-as I said, this is a fun read, so I hope you'll update again!
Twilight Phantom Dragon chapter 9 . 9/18/2010
Amazing story! The varying points of view are well-done and you're doing an excellent job with keeping everyone in-character. I can't wait to see your next update.
ForestRuins chapter 9 . 9/10/2010
this is a great story! i can't wait to read more, i hope you update soon!
Dreaming 11 chapter 9 . 7/26/2010
Please update soon. Please please please please please.
musiccfreakk44 chapter 9 . 7/22/2010
By FAR one of the best, most well written stories I've read yet. Normally stories with too many points of view get choppy and somewhat annoying, but you pull it off well and your entire story flows and is in character. Update soon!
EagleCodex chapter 9 . 7/21/2010
This story is amazing! Please update soon, I am one of the few who scours the archives and looks for old gems buried under 70-some pages of new stories. So I and your faithful readers implore you to keep writing! Don't stop, though it's been months! You can do it :D

Love always- Eagle
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