Reviews for What If?
jones chapter 1 . 4/4/2007
I love the beginning of the stroy! Just to let you know though, it's CPR notg CRP. It sounds like a good story though:).
TheMissingGryff09 chapter 4 . 3/28/2007
i like it.. can't wait for more!
KC chapter 3 . 3/26/2007
Well there's a lot of spelling errors that make it kind of hard to read. As for the story it's self, the way you portrayed Sirius it seems more like James was his acquaintance rather than his best friend. Lily's reaction was okay.