Reviews for Key Through the Heart
kattycha01 chapter 4 . 9/16/2012
I see where this is going. LoL
russell.broad.14 chapter 34 . 9/8/2012
This is one of the best stories that I've read on here. If you still want beta readers for this story or Key Through the Heart: Final Mix, then please let me now.
The de06n fr60 he33 chapter 1 . 7/29/2011
n5ce
Razamataz22 chapter 36 . 4/22/2011
(drops to his hands and knees with his head bent down) I beg of you to update this fic
L33t Horo chapter 34 . 12/10/2010
update THIS fic
justbehappydammit chapter 18 . 9/29/2010
Pimp-Naruto is easily one of the most hilarious things I've ever read. Excellent.
beargeek15 chapter 4 . 8/6/2010
... this isn't a rough draft, it's a completely different story. Can't see why you thought you needed to reboot it, yet. Good either way, tho.

BTW, Lee and Gai are suppoused to be cheesy- that's WHY they're awesome (well, one reason).
L33t Horo chapter 35 . 6/2/2010
hey man u gonna update it or might i ask to adopt it?
Sorus chapter 1 . 5/30/2010
I preffer this than the final mix, I am sorry buri loves this, less confussing than the final mix one
Fire Inu Princess chapter 36 . 2/15/2010
... this is the best crossover fanfic I've ever read... please update soon!
EDelta88 chapter 36 . 2/14/2010
so Naruto and Sasuke are still together... god help the heartless, those two are going to go ape shit once they get over their shock.
EDelta88 chapter 33 . 2/14/2010
"ULTIMA!"-lol, old age and treachery my friends, old age and treachery XD
EDelta88 chapter 31 . 2/13/2010
“Really now, that’s so impolite. Come now, spit spot. Put away those weapons, I’m not here to harm you.”-you seriously turned Mary Poppins into a bad ass?... that's just...wow

love the ending passage that Temari remembered

so when is Naruto going to attatch that charm that Hinata gave him to his keyblade?
EDelta88 chapter 27 . 2/13/2010
“So, the maelstrom inside the sun, hm?”

Hinata’s entire body turned bright red, it seemed every inch of her skin was glowing in embarrassment. Her fellow females’ smiles grew.

“Very… Symbolic,” Sakura purred. Mentally shrugging, but deciding to go with the flow Ino leered.

“Naruto inside Hina, hm?”

-very nice
EDelta88 chapter 25 . 2/13/2010
“Phase two, complete! Now, help me with phase three!”-yeah it's official, Hanabi's awesome
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