Reviews for Key Through the Heart
L33t Horo chapter 34 . 12/10/2010
update THIS fic
justbehappydammit chapter 18 . 9/29/2010
Pimp-Naruto is easily one of the most hilarious things I've ever read. Excellent.
beargeek15 chapter 4 . 8/6/2010
... this isn't a rough draft, it's a completely different story. Can't see why you thought you needed to reboot it, yet. Good either way, tho.

BTW, Lee and Gai are suppoused to be cheesy- that's WHY they're awesome (well, one reason).
L33t Horo chapter 35 . 6/2/2010
hey man u gonna update it or might i ask to adopt it?
Sorus chapter 1 . 5/30/2010
I preffer this than the final mix, I am sorry buri loves this, less confussing than the final mix one
Fire Inu Princess chapter 36 . 2/15/2010
... this is the best crossover fanfic I've ever read... please update soon!
EDelta88 chapter 36 . 2/14/2010
so Naruto and Sasuke are still together... god help the heartless, those two are going to go ape shit once they get over their shock.
EDelta88 chapter 33 . 2/14/2010
"ULTIMA!"-lol, old age and treachery my friends, old age and treachery XD
EDelta88 chapter 31 . 2/13/2010
“Really now, that’s so impolite. Come now, spit spot. Put away those weapons, I’m not here to harm you.”-you seriously turned Mary Poppins into a bad ass?... that's just...wow

love the ending passage that Temari remembered

so when is Naruto going to attatch that charm that Hinata gave him to his keyblade?
EDelta88 chapter 27 . 2/13/2010
“So, the maelstrom inside the sun, hm?”

Hinata’s entire body turned bright red, it seemed every inch of her skin was glowing in embarrassment. Her fellow females’ smiles grew.

“Very… Symbolic,” Sakura purred. Mentally shrugging, but deciding to go with the flow Ino leered.

“Naruto inside Hina, hm?”

-very nice
EDelta88 chapter 25 . 2/13/2010
“Phase two, complete! Now, help me with phase three!”-yeah it's official, Hanabi's awesome
EDelta88 chapter 24 . 2/13/2010
“Well, Daddy says that you’re the most beautiful woman in the village. He also said you’re ‘porn star hot’. I don’t know what that means but he was smiling when he said it so he must have been complimenting you! Also, he always has his Byakugan on when you visit and is always blushing when you leave. Auntie says that means he likes you like daddies and mommies like each other so again, when are you going to be my new mommy?”-... O_O ... oh my

Phase one, complete!-...god help Konoha if she and Naruto ever meet eachother

“This is probably just foreplay to them,” he went on with a detached, scientific air. Vivi’s glowing eyes rolled back into his head and he passed out. Hinata’s eyes widened as her face burned bright red. Her grey eyes then narrowed.

“Excuse me,” she said quietly, before standing up and rushing into the fray.-it would seem that sweet innocent Hinata-chan is not so innocent
EDelta88 chapter 22 . 2/13/2010
lol how to get Jiraiya to stop peeping, get the girls to notice Naruto
EDelta88 chapter 21 . 2/13/2010
wonder what Hanabi's up to
EDelta88 chapter 17 . 2/13/2010
question, a seal is a kind of lock, why doesn't Naruto just use the keyblade on the Curse Seal?
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