Reviews for The Hotness Factor
Devils Anarchist chapter 3 . 7/12/2007
Omg loved it. I give athrun a 11/10. see he was so hot he was beyound te! thats right beyound the number ten! woot. anyways it kicked ass. but please up-date sooner! wanna know what happenes next! sorry for such bad spellin i can barley see the keys cause the lights are out.
Michiyo Hikari chapter 3 . 7/12/2007
Holy freaking-! Whoa. That was way too hot. x_x Wow. This side of Athrun is quite evil! XD

I honestly wanted him to lose his cool for a while, kinda felt sorry for Cagalli being under his tricks 95% of the time XD but then again, that's kinda where this story is going. It's awesome! Please keep up the good work! -

I hope the rating won't change to M . cuz then I won't be able to read it...

But yeah, it's awesome! x3 So awesome that I chose to read it instead of studying for my test XD; ah well, I had fun!
chibi'sapphire chapter 3 . 7/12/2007
Athrun is so damn 'HOT'

He got 5 0ut 0f 5 stars from me!

hahahaha Good luck on your next chapter!
oh.bonita chapter 3 . 7/12/2007
I'm glad you updated this FF! ;D

That was absolutely amazing!

Well done!
Ballick18 chapter 1 . 6/30/2007
OMG! This story is freakin HOT! I love the devilish Athrun, he's hot. You need to update pronto, i want to find out what happens. Also this story ROCKS! ROCKS!ROCKS! ROCKS!
endingofbehan chapter 1 . 6/26/2007
Ha Ha Ha! I love laughing my head off. Really had a great time reading the story. Keep it up. Update as soon as possible.
Konallei chapter 2 . 6/25/2007
so damn good! XD lol hey i still dunno what was thinking cagalli with the strawberries but the only thing i was thinking was: i want them too! dont eat them all yourself! and then i would take the bowl for myeslf XD hahahha really! you made me hungry for chocolates covered strawberries! danm its 1:11 am, where can i find them now? no

i really need an Athrun for myself x3 guess who doesnt want him XD lol

oh yeah, i like your writing style hehe X3 forgot to tell you last time!
Konallei chapter 1 . 6/25/2007
so enjoyable! finally an ac fic that makes me laugh! lol it is really nice! hotaruzala! i knew you draw really nice but you write really nice too! keep up! this is really interesting! and ... who doesn't like devil athrun XD
takari love chapter 2 . 6/8/2007
Wow, Hotaru-chan...

That was damn great..lol

I rate him 10 over 10...lol

Plz update soon
shiloah18 chapter 1 . 6/7/2007
forgot to ask in my Last review.. goOd thing I haven't reviewed for this chap which means.. I can.. *giggLes* he toOk oFf his shades, ne? were they the same shades he wore as ALex Dino? ahh.. what a sight it is! _ you got me in dreamLand back there.. what's gonna happen next? AH! onegai update asap... wanna read more! HA! HA! CagaLLi! take that! now what can you say about your man? is he hawt or is he HOT? lol XD kinda crazy here.. gtg.. in a rush! nyWeiZ, kakoii fic! ;p
shiloah18 chapter 2 . 6/7/2007
suteki deshou questionaire! what a totaL changed of events.. first thing his a totaL gentLeman.. the next he's a sneaky deviL (domo arigatou gozaimasu to daisukiasu'n'caga! red roses, ne? hmm.. I sorta thought she Liked the fLower where her name was taken from.. it's uLtimate coOrdinator not super coOrdinator.. where'd you get the idea that her fave song was masquerade from code geass? Loved the car wash scheme! lol XD is MiriaLLia with him in his pLan? ahh.. aLL the bishounen of GS/GSD.. with their shirts oFf.. *daydreaming* gotta hand it to you MiriaLLia.. what a sight! .~ NANI? was that aLL in his pLan? making her jeaLous? O_O man, how a deviLish Athrun couLd be these days.. kuso Athrun! he's just to damn hot for his own goOD! nyWeiZ, kakoii deshou fic! ;p
cottongreentea chapter 2 . 6/1/2007
OMG! Dat was so ... so... iono what to say! It was just so... HOT! Man, you have your way of words! I love this side of Athrun. It's HOT! And i'm so HAPPY that you finally updated! I hope you update faster! The suspense of Athrun's next "to-do" list is killing me! Ditto for "The Zala Files" too! HOly! This fic is a FAVORITE!
imuzuok chapter 2 . 6/1/2007
i love it! This is soo cool! you're great!
risingsundynasty chapter 2 . 5/28/2007
Who would have thought that Athrun had such a devilish side?
Vani Jane chapter 2 . 5/27/2007
OMG! I lurved this chapter especially with a shirtless AThrun! *drools*! Please, update soon!

Athrun's declaration to Cagalli at the end shocked me! I was like laughing the whole time as I read the fic. Please, please update! This fic is so great!

Innocence that can harm none,

Yhanen Greystone
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