Reviews for Bouncy Castles
Clara chapter 1 . 7/25/2015
That wasn't really a bad ending, bit unsatisfying. Forbidden door sounds good.
SarianaJ chapter 1 . 11/26/2013
Whirlwind421 chapter 1 . 1/4/2009
Good story.
zotlot chapter 1 . 12/28/2007
Esmerelda Diana Parker chapter 1 . 12/19/2007
me likey...
10293845 chapter 1 . 11/21/2007
Cool story! I love it! Oh, I used to play in the bouncing castles, when I was a kid and I spent my vacations on the seashore... Oh, they always were great and a bit... magical... special... I can't find the word. Well, I'll love bouncy castles forever. Yeah, I'm 16, but still, whenever I see one, I feel an irresistable urge to play in it...
Olfactory-Ventriloquism chapter 1 . 10/16/2007
I love the fact that you had him call chihuahuas demented little rats-cause they are. As for the problem you have with your endings, there are some who consider that to be a proper ending, I would have to know what it is you are looking for in your writing before I could offer suggestions, feel free to email me about that.
Kathryn Shadow chapter 1 . 10/15/2007
B00k Freak chapter 1 . 9/18/2007
bouncy castle? ("its like living inside a bouncy castle") any inspiration from new earth?
flight815surviver chapter 1 . 4/9/2007
that might be a good idea only its more likely to end in yelling, it's not fun when the doctor yells. I prefer fluffyness and chiwowahs hehe like this.
Badwolfxx chapter 1 . 3/25/2007
a forbidden door yeah that sounds good...! im sad the doctor and rose never had a proper kiss when both of then wanted it.! ive seen a trailer where the doctor kisses martha in series 3! i already dont like her!

HarryWhoFanatic chapter 1 . 3/23/2007
Sounds like a brilliant idea. I'll read it! I rather liked this ending, though it sounds like there's more to follow...*looks hopeful*

MadderThanTheCheshire chapter 1 . 3/23/2007
SQUEE! Sequel please! I loved this story! Please write a sequel!
Bubblez-rocks-your-socks chapter 1 . 3/23/2007

yay for the 10Rose fluff!:D

apparantly - the doctor is going to sleep with martha?

i suggest we make an outcry :D

this story is really well written and i actually really liked the way it ended!

and do the sequel! :D :D :D and write more fluff, cause, like... i love it!
bex19 chapter 1 . 3/23/2007
Brill! Yes please do a sequel that was great!