|Reviews for Tokyo Nights|
| Bismarck Alexander chapter 16 . 2/5
Good job Yahiko now it would have been a better job if ya had actually killed him
| Bismarck Alexander chapter 12 . 12/13/2013
I've read/skim the story and I freakin love it
| Fenris Jin chapter 3 . 3/6/2013
A meeting, a favor.. and Kaoru got kicked out of her room.. XD
That was rather unexpected.
| Fenris Jin chapter 1 . 3/6/2013
Well that's a good start.. Nothing like a cliffhanger on the first chapter..XD
Hi! Hope you don't mind me dropping by.. XD
| skenshingumi chapter 27 . 12/31/2011
Good ending. I am really glad that you didn't make Kaoru a vampire as that would not seem right for her and you also make it clear that things will not be easy. I liked how you acknowledge that and let make it clear they will face these difficulties together.
| skenshingumi chapter 21 . 12/30/2011
Interesting that there was only one consciousness when Kaoru went to wake Battousai up. Does this mean he is starting to see himself as one? A good chapter and a good fight. Poor Aoshi got left behind again.
| skenshingumi chapter 19 . 12/30/2011
I did enjoy how you have reworked Kenshin's back story although Hiko's thinking on making Kenshin a vampire when and why he did seems a bit of a stretch. I was a bit startled by Kenshin's extremely rough treatment of Kaoru last chapter but it's good to see the darker side start to emerge in a softer way in this chapter. I write it off to what happens when somethings they are entirely unlovable.
Good stuff although personally, I could have done without the details of Shishio and Yumi's sex life.
| skenshingumi chapter 17 . 12/30/2011
I think fight scenes are hardest to write and I think you did well with all of these. I especially liked how you had Misao and Yahiko work together to take Henya out, a nice twist on the original, bringing them to the same level but both grounded instead of both in the air this time.
| skenshingumi chapter 15 . 12/30/2011
I like how you give the sense of Battousai being in control and yet at the same time not knowing what the hell is going on. You manage to convey that Kaoru completely confuses him but he is not going to let on to her or himself or show those feelings.
Good scene with Sano and Megumi, no mushing stuff but definitely shows their vulnerability and commitment.
| skenshingumi chapter 13 . 12/29/2011
I like confused, angry and suspicious Battousai and how Kaoru is winning him over.
| skenshingumi chapter 12 . 12/29/2011
Hmm, dropped like a rock. A very interesting turn of events.
| skenshingumi chapter 10 . 12/29/2011
The classic goodbye scene but a bit less sentimental as poor Kaoru didn't even get a hug this time. I do hope Kaoru doesn't end up having to become a vampire to get this to work out.
| skenshingumi chapter 7 . 12/29/2011
Interesting. It appears that Kenshin could much more directly cause Kaoru harm rather than just lead danger to her doorstep. I wonder if he did inadvertently mesmerize Kaoru or if she just got carried away. I would imagine they will both be feeling awkward after this.
| skenshingumi chapter 6 . 12/29/2011
I am a little confused by this chapter. I don't remember Kenshin ever making it plan that he had done anything to atone. He did say he is not ruled by his thirst but did I miss something? In any case, it was well written and interesting but it did feel to me as if I missed some important scene which would warrant Kaoru's words to Kenshin.
| skenshingumi chapter 4 . 12/29/2011
Again, hats off for managing to keep a good parallel to canon in a modern day vampire story. Not an easy thing to do.