Reviews for If I Could Change the World
mystified111 chapter 1 . 8/30/2019
this fanfiction is really good,with a dark I really didn't like some things about misty here,I mean her breaking up with ash just because he is a freaking pokemon master and has to travel a lot and couldn't spend much time with her,and that too by sending him that horrible letter,those words were so mean and he had every right to hate her after that!I mean I know it's very difficult to maintain a relationship when one is so much busy with his/her respective work but that's what love is all about,adjusting with your partner and supporting them,I mean in the end when they reconciled ash had to literally give up his dream of being a pokemon master,which he had nurtured since childhood and for which he had worked so hard.I mean I know he did it willingly because he chose his love for her above everything else but he still could have maintained a relationship with misty without having to give up his title,and she could and should have adjusted with that,that's what a soulmate does IMO.I mean she too is at the gym most of the times and away from him,so that's very difficult for him boy shall I mention that I think he forgave her quite of her he suffered so much,and there she was already hooking up and later engaged to another guy after learning that he was dead,even though everyone has a right to move on but still.I know she suffered a lot too but still he shouldn't have forgiven her that easily and she could have tried to EARN that apology and trust from could have started off as friends first again and then slowly turning it into a misty that I know would not give up on ash because of those reasons I that's quite a rant but I just wrote what I I'm glad that they reconciled at the end because ash and misty forever lol!and damn why did tracey have to die!anyway well done because I know it takes a lot of hard work and thinking on one's part to write these fanfictions!
Guest chapter 1 . 4/26/2019
you are fucking amazing I am actually here for seconds and I have only done that with harry potter I motherfucking love this story
cosette141 chapter 7 . 8/21/2018
Lol. “Oh no. Did I die again?” That was great! ;) I think my only real complaint with this story is I wish it was gonna be longer!
cosette141 chapter 6 . 8/21/2018
Okay. I really hope he isn’t dead. Also I don!5 like thinking Gary is evil but... MAN THAT WAS AN AWESOME PLOT TWIST! I knew it was him the moment Jolteon showed up! AHHH SO MANY TWISTS AND TURNS ON THIS RIDE
cosette141 chapter 5 . 8/21/2018
Ahhhhhhhhh amazing. I’ve got no more words.
cosette141 chapter 4 . 8/21/2018
Omg ANOTHER twist! I thought Ash was getting beat up by the Lindham guy! NOT BROCK! AWESOMEEEEEEE! And I laughed so hard at Pikachu’s “anytime you wanna get me outta this bag will be fine” hahaha! XD i’m really enjoying this story!
cosette141 chapter 3 . 8/21/2018
Hollllllyyyyyyyyy crap! WHAT A GOOD TWIST! The moment I read that Misty’s fiancé was a rocket... OH MY LORD my jaw literally dropped and my phone fell out of my hands. GREAT JOB! I also love that team rocket still recites the motto xD ahhh great job!
Shaan006 chapter 16 . 4/3/2017
It was awsum
Echo chapter 16 . 4/17/2016
This was literally the best Pokemon fanfiction I have ever read.
Guest chapter 16 . 7/19/2015
Wow...just wow...:-)
daffydonalddueymickey chapter 1 . 6/21/2015
Sh*t's getting real O.O
holstc2 chapter 1 . 7/18/2014
Interesting start. Looking forward to where you take the story.
DaughterofDante chapter 16 . 7/15/2014
That was just adorable
secretwhovianpony chapter 16 . 6/26/2014
This. Was. Totally. AWESOME! Coolest story ever.
Wraith Five chapter 4 . 4/24/2014
Well, it would seem the "Mistara" and so on were intentional, but I think the way you keep having people call Ash "Ashton" makes the whole thing feel a little too formal. Jessie and James, and even Brock, never seemed anywhere near that formal to me.
Other than that, I still think this is pretty good. Although I do think Ash and Pikachu's logic during the fight is flawed. If they'd taken Butch and Cassidy out before anything could happen, they never would've found Brock, and things would've stayed the same. Also, Pikachu is Ash's trademark Pokemon, so if he's not there, then people will know something's up, and having a different Pokemon keep Brock out of the way would've been a better idea.
Wraith Five
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