|Reviews for Moments|
| rololover1 chapter 2 . 2/23/2008
I really enjoyed how the fleeting moments were written and how each time they passed infinity slowly and yet all too quickly! Well done!
| captaincreeds chapter 2 . 5/6/2007
*gets down on knees*
Pretty please make them be together! Oh and, you should continue this.
I had a suspicion it would be Yuffie. She just seems the kind to interupt "moments" .
Keep it up!
| scarletdeathangel05 chapter 2 . 4/16/2007
aah!that is so sad,they cant even have a moment.
but update soon,or else.
| tealtype chapter 2 . 4/15/2007
Say things like that and someone really will hurt you, not that I'd do it, I want to find out what will happen
| 191026 chapter 2 . 4/13/2007
Oh big gr they have to get it together. this is cloud and tifa we r talking about.
albeit i am usually a yaoi fan...ie i read it all the time and write it i still ahve a soft spot for the cloud/tifa relationship!
loving your writing. its so descriptive! anyway, as i throw i brush your way...they have to get together! however, cloud being as slow as he is...itl take ages hehehehe
love ur work
| Dragoon-Yue chapter 2 . 4/11/2007
The title works. As for what I think they were running from... Miasma? The chapter was well writen and I think that the only way Cloud and Tffa are going to get to gether is if Cloud takes a good look at his own emotions - or someone gives him a good kick in the proverbial rear.
I hope you remember the way you want the next part of this to go soon, I want to see what happens next!
| Niktastic chapter 2 . 4/10/2007
wait...i dont get y cloud told her to stop...
| FaNoFbReAtHe chapter 2 . 4/9/2007
LOL yeah me and FallenPhoenix9 are gonna gang up on you if you don't continue. This is still really good! Why did you change the name though? Not that this one sucks but I'm just wondering. Well i came and read this as soon as i got your message and it rocks! Keep it up, or else we will kill you! lol just kidding. or am i? lol
| Le Pecore Nere chapter 2 . 4/8/2007
hmm...love is complex. personally, i like Clotiness, but the beauty of being an author is being to create a story that is uniquely yours, not made by the opinions of others. unless, that's how you want to write it.
| Juniper.Drive chapter 2 . 4/7/2007
Awesomeness...you GOTTA keep on writing!
| FallenPhoenix9 chapter 2 . 4/6/2007
What? Cloud pushed Tifa away? WHY?
OK, you are writing a 3rd scene, whether you want to or not!
If you don't, then I will hunt you down! And then, I'll slap you, just like FaNoFbReAtHe threatened to do...
Oh, and another spelling mistake: revere should be "reverie."
You're gonna write a third part...ok?
Please? Oh please Aimme! PLEASE! I'm begging you! *sniff*
I wanna read more SO bad...
I;m gonna add this story to my favorites and my alerts list...
I'll know if you don't update...
| FallenPhoenix9 chapter 1 . 4/6/2007
I noticed a spelling error: fiet should be "feat"
Otherwise, great first chapter! I can't believe that that person came for them! Tifa was so sad...She cried!
Oh well, I hope it gets happier...
| Dragoon-Yue chapter 1 . 3/31/2007
Oh, please continue!
| mysticmaiden chapter 1 . 3/29/2007
Oh you so have to continue with this, Cloti is my favourite pairing and i just cant get enough of it. Of course it's up to you, but should the urge arise, go for it! thanks
| FaNoFbReAtHe chapter 1 . 3/26/2007
If you don't continue this story i will find you and slap you! lol. Its just that every time I find a good story someone gets halfway into it then just leaves it. God, that gets me mad! So just wanted you to know you are a talented author, and you'd better continue your work.
A fan of yours,