|Reviews for Red Headed Goddess|
| Aldrean Treu Peri chapter 12 . 6/2/2013
Wow! I'm reeling from this last chapter as much as Jessie and Jonny almost! The action scene was really well written, by the way, I could visualize the struggle well.
| Aldrean Treu Peri chapter 2 . 6/1/2013
It's nice to see everyone responding so maturely to the situation. There is a sense of quiet strength to the Quest/Bannon family that is reflected quite well in this story. Although I'd probably ground myself at least until they had the ID figured out of the individual or even just a picture of a face to keep a look out for!
| Aldrean Treu Peri chapter 1 . 6/1/2013
Oooh :) Don't know how I've missed this story for so long! Very in character and descriptive so far! I'm intrigued :)
| edboy4926 chapter 12 . 8/17/2012
Off to the sequel
| Guest chapter 12 . 7/2/2012
Thank you for your lovely story. It kept me on the edge of my seat for at least an hour! You're really talented writer, please, keep up the excellent work! Thank you for the entertainment, Hanna
| Trins xxx chapter 3 . 12/14/2011
I absolutely loved Dougan's last line; it sums it up nicely. I really liked Jessie's characterisation in this chapter; she's ballsy and the comparison to other life-threatening is absolutely valid. I like how the story is picking up pace now, and I look forward to reading the rest.
(Just one minor point; you have loads of short, staccato sentences; it's very effective when used sparingly but I sometimes feel like it's overused in these chapters, but that's just my opinion. Brilliant writing as always.)
| Trins xxx chapter 1 . 12/14/2011
I thought this was a pretty good start. It was a little disconcerting to go straight from prologue to chapter 1 in the same chapter, so to speak, but I guess that's more my expectations.
I loved the minutiae of details you included in this, the way she was moving from one foot to another and the way she kept pushing her hair behind her ears; it all brought the scene to life. But I have to admit that I thought Jessie's reaction exceeded what I would ordinarily expect from her. I can imagine her being shocked and frightened but not tearful. But that's just me. I can't wait to read the rest.
| deminicgirl chapter 12 . 6/28/2011
I know I'm a little late but I think I've read this story several times and always go searvhing for the sequal: ( I know its been years buy its never to latr haha either way I really enjoyed the story. Thank you!
| Wickid Jennie chapter 12 . 4/27/2011
I see that, sadly, you wrote this 4 years ago. And there seems to be no sequel on your page. I'm to assume none will be made? It's a shame. You have such a talent for writing. (Plus I was up til midnight reading this, when I have to wake up early with my children!) I guess it's up to us readers to fill in the ending. Wonderful story thus far. I have a few critiques, but manly things I feel a character should have done in a given situation as opposed to your writing itself. :) I sincerly hope to find you completing this soon.
| Squeakin chapter 12 . 2/19/2011
Love this story, so bummed to see it end without much closure, and no sequel on your page. : But I enjoyed the writing, well done all around, thanks for sharing
| LadyTrish chapter 12 . 9/28/2010
First of all I want to congratulate for this amazing story. I loved the way you stayed true to the character and how you build up the suspense and action. It was amazing that you kept the reader in the dark for plenty of chapters, and I loved the way the pace quickened in the last chapters. I hope there will be a sequel at one point (hint, when would that be?) but I must say that I am a bit disappointed by your ending. I presume Zach is dead, which I am a bit sad about because I would have loved to have him alive so Race can tare him to pieces. I don't know why, but throughout this story I envisioned Race being the one beating the living crap out of this guy, of course with Jonny in toe :)
Anyway, thank you again for this lovely story and I do hope that at one point you would continue :)
All the best
| NKSCF chapter 4 . 12/30/2009
Well done, Goddess Evie. I know you probably won't be on here, but I have to say how entranced I am with this story. You've done an amazing job displaying Jessie's realistic attitude towards this stalker. Jonny as well. What could he have said to her the night they learned about this?
I eagerly await the rest of this story. I'm captivated.
| DevilCuriosity chapter 12 . 6/2/2008
.god. I'm speechless. Everything that's happened between the first chapter and the last was insane. It's so sad the way Jessie reacted in the end, though. Totally understandable but unfortunate. I would've thought that at least one of the guys in her life could've held her in their arms and told her everything was over. Boo. Poor Jessie.
Amazing story, by the way. Loved every minute of it. I'm so thankful that you're writing a sequel. You have me hanging by a limb here. This was fantastic. I'm going to have to pass it on. It was one of my most fulfilling reads!
| DevilCuriosity chapter 1 . 5/28/2008
I'll admit, you have me hooked. Looking forward to continuing the rest of this. By the way, I love the depiction you paint between Jonny and Jessie. Couldn't have done it better myself.
| BryBry628 chapter 12 . 4/26/2008
Up until the end of this chapter I would have said this had become one of my favorite stories from this entire site. You handled the situations well and thoroughly (except for not having a reason for the police to be searching Zach apartment in the first place). You also did a great job with the emotions. I'm glad she didn't run into Johnny's arms at the end, her reactions were much more realistic I think. Same for Johnny considering he most likely killed the boy.
I do think this story should have had another 2 chapters. One the aftermath, and 1 the epiloge or just a little bit more time after the situation. To me a sequel is another story branching from the original but deals with an entirely different situation. This is more a to be continued situation.
I agree with another reviewer that I have yet to find a story that leaves the ending up the readers imagination to be enjoyable. I guess I just like closure. But this doesn't address s so many issues namely Zach's fate. Even if you didn't resolve Johnny and Jessie's relationship completely but instead just had a scene that hinted at it or whatever would be one thing. But to totally disregard the fate of a character who has been the main subject since Chapter 1 just leaves the story undone.
If you completed the initial story before creating a sequel then I think this story could be wonderful because it was before this "ending". I did really enjoy your writing style, the emotions, the setups and everything else though.