Reviews for Observant
OldFanfictionThatIHateDearly chapter 1 . 12/11/2010
Ouch, my heart is bleeding! I just want to go in a corner and moe myself to death.
kwaiiChan-chan chapter 1 . 7/2/2008
So sweet! and Very in characcter. I love it!
Produce Stand chapter 1 . 7/24/2007
Cettie-girl chapter 1 . 6/4/2007
I seriously love this ficlet. You've captured Mitsukuni and Takashi's essence in it very well.

I agree, not many people seem to realize/care that Honey HAS been around Mori as long as Mori has been around Honey, and will probably know Takashi just as well as Takashi knows him. And Honey is a lot deeper and observant than people seem to realize/care, as shown by how they know everyone else likes Haruhi here and in the anime and manga, even when the others themselves don't seem to realize.

The fact that Takashi feels so guilty about this is wonderful too. And Mitsukuni accepting Takashi, flaws and all is beautiful, and something that I believe would work both ways within their relationship.

I also loved the way you had Takashi say a few words and want to say more but not know how to. Very in character, very beautiful.
Phiso chapter 1 . 5/26/2007
Kyaa, unexpected, but very cute.

Gosh, you need to write more OHC fiction. :3

Anyway, again, excellent job writing Mori-kun. I do believe you have a knack for him, something most people don't possess. (Too many ignore him and stick him in with a mere, "Ah" somewhere.) I loved his character here, and it rings so true it's wonderful.

And Hunny-kun! So cute and understanding - again, exactly how I would picture it. He wouldn't hate Takashi for it; maybe be a little sad sometimes (as anyone is when a close friend becomes interested in another), but he would mostly support his friend and find it kind of funny how his cousin was so afraid to admit it.

Good job. Wow, you're good.
Cymbala chapter 1 . 4/24/2007
:) this fic made me smile!
tatsumaki chapter 1 . 4/9/2007
Interesting take on Haruhi's effects on the Host Club boys. I like it. Also, hooray for Honey x Mori cuteness!
mikomi bansiki chapter 1 . 3/26/2007
so kawai! is that how you spell it? super cute!
Airenko chapter 1 . 3/25/2007

That was about the cutest, most sweetest thing ever. Awesome! Love this story so much!
cheshirejin chapter 1 . 3/23/2007
Ah! so cute. I like the way Hunny thinks.