Reviews for Straws
zekeschance chapter 1 . 6/3/2014
This was amazing. Gut wrenching.
Chjajcjjslakncjska chapter 1 . 4/1/2012
Oh. My. God. I love this. Amazing!
Sparkiebunny chapter 1 . 11/25/2010
Wow. Simply amazing. Heartbreakinng and beautifully written. Excellent work!
Desertfyre chapter 1 . 1/2/2010
Wa, that was sad. :( Good angsty story.
mousefiction chapter 1 . 10/23/2009
That was great. I love tags to this episode.
supergirl3684 chapter 1 . 7/1/2007
beautiful!
FBI Bones chapter 1 . 3/31/2007
I've been wanting to watch Supernatural for ages and in February I found had them, so I watched up to 'Born under a Bad Sign' and then there wasn't any more, next day they had all been taken down ::sigh:: I've read summaries for 'Heart' so have a basic idea of what happened and can't wait until I can find somewhere where I can actually watch it (along with the other episodes I haven't seen) as I can't watch Supernatural on the TV for a couple of reasons.

I really liked this tag, it was well written and flowed nicely. It's really great to see you writing something other than SG1 (although I still love all of them) well done and thank you for posting!

~Red~
PointOfView chapter 1 . 3/26/2007
OMG! This is without a doubt the way the episode kept going. How did you know exactly how to finish it? No joke! This is how the show would have progressed if the silly old programmers would get a clue and know I'd gladly watch an hour and ten minute episode of Supernatural... as happily as any Lost or Heroes fan eats up the extra few minutes they get in airtime.

I cannot believe how perfectly you captured this! Seriously, except for the fact that I pictured Dean going to Sam, this is the *exact* way I pictured the ep ending! I mean Sam stroking out and not breathing until Dean told him to is exactly what I had pictured... and you wrote it all out so beautifully and with such amazing feeling...

I AM ABSOLUTELY FREAKIN' AWESTRUCK!

THANK YOU! THANK YOU! THANK YOU!

Please write more Supernatural fiction! You totally get this show and the characters and as a bonus you're a fantastic writer! AMAZING JOB!

PERFECTION! :-)
freaker chapter 1 . 3/25/2007
good job.
TraSan chapter 1 . 3/25/2007
Blasted site wouldn't let me review yesterday. I'm nothing if not persistent, so I'm back today. (c:

Excellent tag! That episode was heart-breaking enough, but these lines added to it...

Forehead pressed against the older man’s chest as they rocked, Sam confessed brokenly, “We’re not gonna to make it” Because nobody survived in his presence.

Jaw tense, eyes fixed, arms held protectively tight around his charge, “Watch us” Dean replied steadily. Because if he surrendered to the doubt, the fear now—he’d be giving up on his brother…and Dean just didn’t know how to do that.

Very Nice.
anybody-out-there chapter 1 . 3/25/2007
Loved that episode, and obviously I'm not the only one:)

You have a beautiful way of describing our favorite brothers, and the events in "heart".
Izzy4 chapter 1 . 3/24/2007
A lovely, emotional tag to one of the best Supernatural eps yet. Good job!
Freefall chapter 1 . 3/24/2007
Ahh great job!
Faye Dartmouth chapter 1 . 3/24/2007
Aw, man, those two need to be coddled so badly. I worry for them so much. They've been through hell together and it never seems to get better. I really hope they make it.

Lovely piece :) Makes me want to cry, which means I really like it.
X5vale chapter 1 . 3/24/2007
*cries*

Sadly beautiful.

Thank you.
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