Reviews for Waste My Time
Guest chapter 21 . 11/1/2017
It is one of the best James lily fanfic.
I loved it to the end.
It does not even look like a fanfic.
It looks more like a prologue to Harry Potter series
Thank you for spending your time to write this
Guest chapter 6 . 10/6/2017
They're both such bitches.
genevieveyoung chapter 21 . 4/20/2017
This story was so cute :) Love the P&P aspects!
Guest chapter 21 . 3/30/2017
I enjoyed your story. Thank you.
AustenNi chapter 21 . 2/11/2017
I just realized that you wrote this 10 years ago! That is crazy!
I normally don't read Harry Potter fanfiction because I like the original story so much I can't read other versions, but I do love the love story of James and Lily so I gave it a try and read this one. I really liked it! I have been reading fanfictions from other story's for 7 years now and I can say yours was one of the most well written so far. Congratulations!
Also loved the Pride and Prejudice references, it is also one of my favorite books.
Wish you all good things!
eyna skywalker chapter 21 . 1/25/2016
I really enjoyed reading this. Thank you for sharing!
Pottergirlfreva chapter 21 . 1/9/2016
No offense but if the guy in your life thinks this is waste of time i strongly suggest a reality check. The story was sweet and sensual in the right way . It was surprising how u caught the right emotions in such few chapter most others are 50 chapters or writing !
LothlorienImladris chapter 21 . 12/1/2015
I loved your story! I certainly enjoyed reading it very much!
I loved how you portrayed the characters, especially James and Lily. The only thing that bothered me was James and Sirius' attitude towards muggles in the first chapter. I know they were immature and stupid, but from what JKR told us, despite all his faults, James never stood for that kind of prejudice, and since that same prejudice was the reason Sirius left his family, I hardly think he would behave that way. I also found weird that Remus and Lily weren't even on first name basis; I know he was a marauder, but with all the time they spent together during prefect duty I would have thought they would be friendly, since Lily was such a loving person and Remus was quite a nice bloke.
Other than that, I loved every part of this fic. My favourite part was probably when Lily goes to Quidditch practice and James gets distracted :) Poor James LOL
JoPoGirlsKickAss chapter 21 . 10/13/2015
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potterheadcharles chapter 21 . 2/10/2015
It was NOT waste of time. It was sweet, cute, adoring, and...just brilliant.
Guest chapter 21 . 1/17/2015
Evictore chapter 21 . 12/18/2014
Wow! You're an absolutely brilliant writer. This story could never be a waste of time. I love your stories.
Sigmoid Darkz chapter 21 . 12/2/2014
It was beautiful. I know its kinda late review, but I wanted to appreciate this. You did "waste my time" because I should be preparing for my pharmaceutics paper.

Brilliant in all sense. Few spelling mistakes and nothing else I guess. If you see do read this review then know that, I am not going to read Pride and Prejudice because I want to enjoy the essence of that story just by reading this. I will be using some of the lines from the bedroom scene next time my girlfriend starts crying. I have the same habit as James of messing up my relationship. Sayonara
Guest chapter 9 . 11/7/2014
Ooh! Was that an Anne Shirley reference I caught there? Nice! Red-haired heroines are the best!

Aside from that, I love this story. I love how Lily hates James and I love the Pride and Prejudice references as well. I think Lily's hatred is very well done, and you've made her very sassy without being boring. :) It's late night and I can't think of anything more to say, so thank you for the wonderful story!
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