Reviews for War
mintgil chapter 14 . 2/29/2012
that was a great story , i really enjoyed it !
mintgil chapter 13 . 2/29/2012
Wait ! don't tell me he's going by Jacob ?
mintgil chapter 9 . 2/29/2012
YaaaaaaaaaaaY , bella is back ! Can't wait to happen next !
BirdieMing chapter 3 . 1/22/2011
this is starting to make me cry :(( jacob is a son of a bitch
rubyred21 chapter 14 . 10/24/2010
such a happy ending -.-

It was good though ;]
Mz.Lokera chapter 14 . 5/30/2010
Actually I Loved It!

I Actually Cried [
Just another PSYCHOTIC girl chapter 14 . 2/20/2010
MEANIE! You made me cry..
Seraluna Reality chapter 14 . 12/30/2009
You r so creative! It was so good, sad but awsome... I loved the whole Idea! U r a good writer 2. U should check out my stories! Ur also the 1st person I reviewed because im usally to lazy to comment others stories, but I did this one. You should happy!
danielhowell chapter 14 . 7/31/2009
OMG. Ur so mean..u made me

i was listening to Turn Right by the Jonas Brothers while reading this story and its a sad song so it fit in with the story.

this was really good :)
Sweeterlinckske chapter 14 . 7/27/2009
im crying, its so sad
HFKSINF chapter 14 . 7/12/2009
Oh. My. Goodness. I LOVE THIS STORY! I loved how you used extreme detail and examples to show us the length to Edward's grief. I loved how you made a reason for the Cullens to leave, causing a huge conflict to erupt and create a very exciting a tragic story. loved how Edward "fantasized" that Bella was going to wake up and such, except I was wondering two things. One: Was he passed out, or daydreaming so much he was not affected by the real world at all? Two: How did he fall out the window? Anyway, I really loved everything about your story.


I REALLY WANT TO SEE A SEQUEL! Please please please post a sequel! I think maybe you do something about how the Cullens got past his death or if they didn't at all. Maybe show Charlie grieving for his daughter's death. Something like that. I really want to know what happens next!

Love your stories and please keep writing!

~Miyako Mizuki
pen 42 chapter 14 . 6/20/2009
im not particualy fond of this story but i do think u are a great author. a good author can make u feel anything nom matter what mood ur in the fact that i cried many times proves that u r good
twilightfreak5489 chapter 14 . 6/11/2009
omg how sad i want to like cry
Human Time Lord Meta-Crisis chapter 14 . 6/2/2009
I loved the story, mabye it is because im tired but I found edwards insanity hilarous!

Wonderful work, Dark very very dark...
Cassidy chapter 14 . 5/2/2009

How could you do this?

Seriously, this is absolutely TERRIBLE. You could at least have ended off with Edward and Bella being together, dead, of course, in either heaven or hell...
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