Reviews for The Thirteenth Doctor: The second adventure
thecolouryes chapter 2 . 8/11/2009
*poke* Will that make you update this? Or at least remember it? Somehow, I don't think so, but you know you never know...

Yes, I talk wierdly sometimes, don't mind me. But I'm loving the ginger Doctor and Twitch and Susan I'm just confused about... Oh well. I'm just hoping you update this, it seems like it would be fun for a giant paradox.

autumnlover chapter 2 . 10/18/2007
oh, jokes! i want to know what happens next

but i guess i can just ask you, can't i

i know you won't tell, though!

Scarf Warriors chapter 2 . 4/28/2007
Bah! I wait ages for an update from you and I read it in 10 seconds!

Hurray, how will the almighty paradox be resolved...?
templremus1990 chapter 1 . 4/27/2007
I love your characters. The little detail about dancing to music is superb. Great stuff indeed!
Cute Gallifreyan chapter 2 . 4/27/2007
Meh... I hate it when FF is not working right. It's not a bad chapter but nothing is better than the orginal.I can't wait to read more, update soon. ;)
Wariena chapter 1 . 3/31/2007
Ooh, a new story? AND a new character, I see. Bring it!
Cute Gallifreyan chapter 1 . 3/25/2007
I like's really cute. I just hope you finish your other story soon. I want to know why the aliens were after Susan in the first place.