Reviews for Happy Valentines Day Allyson Happy Valentines Dan
PrayerGirl chapter 1 . 3/4/2013
Joe Jonas's girl chapter 1 . 4/16/2009
See the way I think you should have wrote it was after hte diner he kisses her again and they make love under the stars(full love graphic scene by the way) and about 3 months later she tells Danny that she's pregnat and it's his kid that would be kthe best story ever. I think that they should make a seqle Now you see it 2 and they end up together that would be so ausome
anonymous chapter 1 . 10/13/2007
love the last line. very abrupt, though. it has potential, you could've worked on it a bit more. love the idea. mind your sentence structure, though.
MayLauren chapter 1 . 5/27/2007
Great one shot i loved it! :o)
iluvflight29dwn chapter 1 . 3/26/2007
aww u should make a sequal 4 this