Reviews for White Carnations
SketchyxNinja chapter 1 . 2/27/2014
Holy f*cking sh*t, that was intense. You made it realistic and I love that. Of course, they're good at what they do but that still makes them human. Fantastic job, :)
Weisslilie chapter 1 . 8/4/2013
Wow. Your story has made me cry, really. Not just a tear or two, but I had to calm down first before writing this review. It is just so painful, that they wont be remembered. Worst thing I could imagine.
Thank you very much for this.
xXxShiniXKazexXx chapter 1 . 10/12/2012
Brilliant. Contains very well-done emotional tone!
Arya May chapter 1 . 9/15/2012
I love this. It's depressing, but it's written really well... and besides, I'm a sucker for angst.
Decepitcon project XD chapter 1 . 2/25/2012
Reno had the most brutle way to atleast he killed the guy who stabbed him and he got buried with his favorite weapon, and the rest was just was just so sad.
missrynne chapter 1 . 1/12/2012
There was something heartwrenching in the way they put a white carnation only on Elena's grave. I'm not a big fan of the Turks, but this one is much loved. (:
sissyHIYAH chapter 1 . 12/18/2011
Yep. Crying now. Wonderful and sad and damn it all, I loved it.
Lucite chapter 1 . 11/12/2011
I like this piece, it's really sad but beautiful )

I think its great!
doughreyme chapter 1 . 8/14/2011
That was so depressing. Good job.
NocturnalMorning chapter 1 . 3/4/2011
It was kind of heart breakingly true. I loved it
eclaire291 chapter 1 . 1/15/2011
The white carnation got to me. That one simple sentiment tied this entire story together and tugged at the heartstrings.

Jeez. I've never cried over a fanfiction before but this one choked me up. I think my eyes started to mist over during the paragraph about Rude.

This is so well-written. I can't wait to read more of your stories.
Aoli chapter 1 . 1/11/2011
Oh! It's so beatiful T.T

Very nice piece of writing, congratulations
inheavenshands chapter 1 . 1/3/2011
Beautiful. Simply radiates brilliance.
BlazeOnMars chapter 1 . 1/2/2011
Wow. That was heart-wrenching. Really, it was. It nearly had me in tears and there are very few things that can do that. I'm a huge fan of the Turks and this, without having dialogue of any kind, portrayed them very accurately. I really loved your closing line. Well done.
Siriania chapter 1 . 9/4/2010
This... this one made me cry.

When Elena died. I couldn't understand...

When Reno died. I was at chock...

When Rude passed away. I whispered "no way"...

When Tseng left the world. I started to sob...

And when I read the last sentence. I cried!

I know that the life of a Turk is not easy and safe. They can die, but don't want to accept it until it's to late...
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