|Reviews for Just a Simple Mission|
| xFlyingBug chapter 7 . 8/5/2013
This story is sooo cute! i love the way you made Sephiroth look so helpless, and still very IC. However, I sincerely don't recall any scar in his collarbone during Advent Children.. Do you have any screenshots? I'd like to see it :)
| zexydemyx66 chapter 7 . 12/22/2011
Awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww. Too cute. Please write more.
| chibi heishi chapter 7 . 11/9/2009
Aw, the ending was so cute. Though you really freaked me out with the last chapter. Still, this was very good.
| The Genesis Awards chapter 1 . 2/14/2009
I am extraordinarily pleased to inform you that your story, Just a Simple Mission, has been nominated for The Genesis Awards Best Action/Adventure Category. The Genesis Awards exists to reward the authors of FFVII fanfiction that show a certain standard of grammar and formatting, relevance to canon and characterization. Your story was nominated by Strange and Intoxicating -rsa- and passed to the judging rounds because of the quality your story possesses. On April 15th, the Shortlisting for the Genesis Awards will take place, and on June 15th the final results will be tallied and posted.
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Congratulations, and good luck.
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| GoldenShinyWireofHope chapter 6 . 10/17/2008
Wow. I've read so many "how do they deal with a crisis?" stories from you, but every single time there's something different.
In this one the absolute weakness and vulnerability of Sephiroth is so obvious when you compare it to Zack's image of him as the strong warrior. Of course, we know that he survives, but still you had me gripped by every ebb and flow of his failing life. The way that you have foreshadowed this moment and the drama that you bring out in this chapter really brings this to a haunting climax. I can't wait to read the rest of this story!
| Strange and Intoxicating -rsa chapter 1 . 10/15/2008
This story, Just a Simple Mission, has been accepted by the Genesis Awards as a Action/Adventure nomination. The Genesis Awards is a Final Fantasy VII awards site which highlights some of the best fanfiction written for FFVII. If you would like to see where exactly the site is, please go to my profile, where there is a link.
I wish you luck.
| GoldenShinyWireofHope chapter 5 . 10/7/2008
Oh wow. What a great chapter!
I love Dalton's comment "Welcome to Dismal" it reminded me of the faux politeness he had given them when they first arrive. It made me think that all the while this was the welcome that he wanted to give.
And the way Zack gave up hope and prepared for an honourable death. It was so moving to see such an optimistic character driven to such desperation.
And I love the fact that you didn't name Sephiroth until the the very end. Obviously, having read the previous scene I knew who it was, but it was great to see it from Zack's perspective, not knowing who the figure was or whether he would be saved.
Gripping! Well done!
| GoldenShinyWireofHope chapter 4 . 9/28/2008
Oh wow! This was really powerful, the way you've given hints at what's to come, and let them come to pass little by little. The way you fulfilled Sephiroth's dream was really chilling. I'm looking forward to reading more!
| Crystal Rose of Pollux chapter 7 . 6/4/2008
Oh, what a fic! I loved Zack's little comments in the earlier chapters! Aww, and Maryn is adorable!
Yikes at the dreams! Poor Seph and Zack...
And yikes at Zack getting framed!
Adored the friendship cuteness!
| Meneil chapter 7 . 5/31/2007
Hey... wow I just read all of your story and it was great! You described each scene so perfectly, it honestly felt like I was right there with Zack and Sephiroth throughout their entire adventure.
| Garowyn chapter 7 . 4/23/2007
Finally I finish this! Excellent work!
| Garowyn chapter 6 . 4/15/2007
Two more to go! I love the description and your writing style. Then again, I've probably said this before, but it's worth repeating.
| CornCob chapter 7 . 4/8/2007
what a cute story! The whole thing was just wonderful, sad, suspenseful, all that jazz- you know.
Hate to see it end, but hey, the ending wsa great. haha.
the whole seph dying thing was prety awful! but well done.
hope to see more from you!
| fantasypen chapter 7 . 4/7/2007
well Zack sure as hell wasn't the only one agaonizing over Sephy dying, It's so unSephiroth like. This was a really cool story, hmm is it over?
| Chibi Cheesecake chapter 7 . 4/7/2007
YAY! Good conclusion to a good story! Yes, you must write more pre-Nibelheim stuff! *pokes*
Anyway, this story was a ton of fun (though maybe not so much so for Zack and Sephiroth...) and the end was really cute, I gotta say. XD
See you later!