Reviews for Shades of Red
mabidiso chapter 2 . 10/4/2012
Very vivid and easily imaged.
naash chapter 2 . 6/14/2010
owh sasuke's first kiss. this fic i really like how they interact the romance is there yet not there.
naash chapter 1 . 6/14/2010
:) its really good
tsukuYomi chapter 2 . 5/14/2009
Nice. I likey :) You've updated once, can you do it again? ...Pretty PLEASE?
Dreaming101 chapter 2 . 11/16/2008
awws that was cute... this was really interesting, added to Redshift well! :D

dybank chapter 2 . 9/23/2008
He, it's good! I didn't read Redshift but it's still good without it! (:
ManaTatsumya n' Yue chapter 2 . 10/28/2007
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Neon Genesis chapter 2 . 7/17/2007
Wow, I like this. Well done!
ButaLove chapter 2 . 5/8/2007
I loved it! GO SASUTEN!
HJWG chapter 2 . 5/2/2007
Scary, I'm NOT into SasuTen (SasuSaku OR Sasunobody) but you write very very well
Flower of youth chapter 2 . 4/30/2007
Oh... Continue... Please...

This is getting exciting
Lorelai chapter 2 . 4/20/2007
What isn't there to love about this? I love the one sentence themes with a moment presented. And of course, SasukexTenten is just awesome. I like how it isn't romantic but there's definitely something there. Subtly is awesome! Thank you for writing!
naash chapter 2 . 4/18/2007
wow... that was great. you do sasuten well. i mean really well. i like it a lot
Amatyultare256 chapter 2 . 4/10/2007
This is a very interesting and unique story idea-I like it! Especially as a companion piece to Redshift, which was all about the atmosphere, with almost no details, I think this kind of 'series of small moments' storytelling is very effective.

While I like both chapters, I think I like the first chapter more. I think it's a good thing that the moments aren't 'linear' temporally (as in, going from the beginning of her captivity to the end), and aren't predictable. However, I liked how there seemed to be a theme in the first chapter moving from Tenten first feeling happy around Sasuke (by holding her own in a fight) to him becoming 'her world'. Okay, maybe I just made that up. Or maybe the second chapter has a theme that I just don't see. But, I thought I saw it in the first chapter and I don't in the second. Still, they're both excellent.

Also, is there significance to your switches between past and present tense? It didn't bug me as much as it usually would, simply because of the segmented story-telling, but it did make me curious. _
Areless chapter 2 . 4/9/2007
this is cool, u should write more on this!
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